All Comments on 'The Gentlemen's Club'

Well written and easy to read. Not a lot of errors as in many submissions. Loved the plot and how one obligation led to the next. Surprised me with exhibitionism as culmination of story. Predictable in many places, thus it was possible - and could happen to me! Yum!

thanks for posting the story good read. 5 stars

I came into the story a bit skeptical, but I have to say, the writing is excellent, the imagery is very well done, and her slow descent into debauchery is almost perfectly told. Just an excellent story!

Five stars !!!!!