All Comments on 'The Gift Exchange'

Somehow he went from being a nice guy to an asshole in just a paragraph or two without any foundation for it.

mmmm very sensual, well written and fast paced, " chasten" has it wrong as far as I can see it is a story and a lot of men would have the time of there lives with a daughters friend who was 22, given half a chance, (I know that it does not happen ) but it is just a great read. I'm looking for more like this.

I'm not exactly sure how I can have gotten my opinion about whether it worked for me wrong...that's an explanation I'd like to hear. I agree both that "it is a story" (not sure what to make of that) and that many men would love a shot at a daughter's friend. However, failing some psychic reading of my unconscious mind, I'm going to stick with it doesn't work for me since I didn't "feel" the cheating on a wife that seemed pretty cool.

I fully realize that some story lines don't work for some people, and i have a wide variety of stories out there for just that reason. I always like to see feedback but of course positive feedback is always preferable. That said.... Chasten has a right to his/her opinion. If it didnt work for you, that's fine. I hope you find something else i have written that does.

Thanks to all for your support on all my works.

M

He did go from a man of principles who taught young girls values to a horn dog that betrayed his vows -

Whether or not the fundamental story works for you is determined by what else you took away from it - the erotic story is fine the underlying failure of values is not - for many - no wrong answers expressed just multiple right answers depending on your perspective.

What is right for one is not for all

His daughter has two names.

An excellent story!

This is a good story and is different from many you have written. Please finish it.

The pictures this story created in my mind really got me rolling.

This one feels good. As i said before, i spent 17 years as the only male GS leader and trainer in the coucil. I did all of the outdoor training and the girls teased me mercilessly. Never ended like this though.