All Comments on 'The Gift of Love'

a loving story written by a guy.

Write some more, my friend.

maybe longer next time.

I absolutely loved this story.It has everything that the special someone in your life could ever offer!

My darling..the seed is sown..may we reap the rewards of a new life that we have created mwah x

This story could have easily been in the "romance" genre. Although no background was given, one still had the feeling by the erotic gentle love scenes that these two exuded love and tranquility. One wonders if new life brought joy in their future. Well written romantic story.

Well written sensuous and erotic.

I like this short story. Short and to the point. This writer has some talent, wish he would have continued writing.