All Comments on 'The Gilded Cage Ch. 07'

Yes !!! loved it, Lord I wish she had allowed Alex to kill Harry, hmm makes one wonder who the true monster in this story was.

I hate that it has to end but it was done just the right way. :)

I do not usually go in for this type of story but you had caught my eye and I'm so glad I read it, though you could have gotten away with a single entry as a short story but either way I still loved it. I look forward to reading more of your creations in the future. :Þ

i just found your story and i loved it! i hope to see more work from you , you have talent! i especially have a fetish with non-consent so you hooked me , happy writing ~toodles

I hope you write more.

Throughly enjoyed the series

Loved this series, hated to see it end! Please write more! Kudos to you!

loved this story and hope that you will indeed write again.

wow i love this story its great really well written and the unexpexted twist of events i wish it was longer!! lovedit!

This was a GREAT story. it's as if you can read my mind!! lol

Yep. Worked quite well

For your first piece this is brilliant! Looking forward to your next story

great story, i read all of the chapters! my favorite one on the site i think.

Seriously, I've ready many and this is by far the best....great plot, great writing. This is even the first story I've commented on. Hope you write more!

You are now my favorite author and this is my favorite story too. Awesome!

This story was great I found this after reading the first two chapters of a womans place (which I'm enjoying). Yours are the first that I've read separate chPters of. I have enjoyed them so much I'm considering buying myself a cage for my boyfriend and me, haha. Keep the stories cumming

very nice job

try some other stuff

your style is very easy to read

keep it up and good luck

i like how ur stories end happy so far :D ~darkpriestess

I have become a very big fan of your work, I am loving all of your stories and wish to read more!

I am thankful that they have happy endings so far, I'm sure my opinion would be different if they didn't. Keep writing!

Your series was AMAZING!

Amazing story

I was blown away again great series...

I loved this ....always love the combination of dominance mixed with love rather than outright cruelty but you could have built up to their love more and enhanced it with a few more chapters in the beginning .Great writing ...more please

Honestly if this was a book I'd buy it. You're a marvelous writer and I I wish there was much much more.

You seemed to take a lot of time in previous chapters and rushed the redemption chapter as if your heart wasn't in it. Hope you re write this.

but I'll write it anyway.

VIOLENCE IS NOT SMART and the world has far too much of it already.

I love your stories. Please, don't let the negative comments make you not want to continue. Your fantasies can be whatever you like. I think it's fucking amazing.

Thanks for posting.

It was a little scary, the part with Harry. But other than that, it was beautiful. The love and passion written into it was amazing. I like your stories.

I always loved this story and wished there was more if could say anything did wished that she would of fought harder in 1st part of story cause no matter what it was still wrong for what he was doing loved it was happy ending hope that made sense

so i read this, not gonna lie thought i was going to hate it but its a really nice story! it made me think about my favorite story but surprise! you wrote it too. make more story's like this.

Hey Mello T :)

a secret;) if a woman did to a man,even half of what Alex did to Jessica,the man would sprint out of the relation at a speed faster than Usain Bolt!! ;)but your writing style absorbing and intoxicating!!...read all the chapters!! commenting would be unfair otherwise!! ;)

and the pathetically cliched excuses....in case of women its different..isn't it?...doesn't hell pain injury turn her on and leave her wet?!...it does...coz we guys are saying so!! ;) same flesh and blood dude!!

and of course cliche again jessica was all paws over Alex asking him to experiment with her pain orgasms and keeping half the playroom blah blah!! loads of balderdash!! ;)

moisturisers and creams that sting, heal female injuries that hurt like shit?! :D that easy?! ;) hahahahaha....what a laugh!! ;) priceless you guys are!! :D

Loved this story!

The ending was perfect!

Ever thought about writing a similar story with a different ending?

I think it would be equally good if all three of them wound up having a relationship together. Perhaps she can evade Harry long enough to get through to him and convince him to stay to talk to Alex. Then she can convince them both that she has enough love available to share with both of them; that neither needs to be jealous of the other because she loves them both.

Of course Jess and Harry would have to convince Alex that Harry had misunderstood the kind of relationship that she and Alex had; that Harry was only trying to do what he thought Jess wanted; that he disliked how he had arranged for Alex to be distracted since he considers Alex such a good friend or even like a brother.

If you do write a story like that, with that kind of ending, I would love to know so that I can read that version as well.

Great series thank you! Wishing it wasn't over.

This is very very clearly just a fantasy because it’s devoid of any realism whatsoever.

With that in mind it’s nice to see a non con fantasy with a HEA. Which obvs again just gives credence to it being pure fantasy. Even if the primary male character isn't a loving Dom but is actually an arrogant, jealous, possessive arsehole who believes himself to be above the law - kidnapping, rape, torture, physically and emotionally abusive.

As for the title of my comment, well it’s because on a bad day this story would just piss me off completely. An arrogant arsehole decided “ah fuck it why should I bother paying for a willing sub/ slave when I can just kidnap a pretty woman who conveniently has no surviving family AND no friends, lucky me she’s just arrived in a new town looking for a job so she doesn’t have any work colleagues who might miss her either. Wow, more luck, she’s a closet submissive who wants someone to take charge of her life and love her...I mean honestly what a coincidence, you just can’t make this shit up um unless you do. At least it wasn’t all brought on by Stockholm Syndrome and fixed by his magic cock....never mind.

I’m not going to go into all the cliches about Harry’s reactions, attitude and abuse.

On a serious note the main reason kidnapping stories piss me off is because Human Trafficking aka (modern but very real) slavery IS very very real problem. Writing about it for foreplay is just really poor taste.

Genuine BDSM between fully freely consenting adults Is a beautiful thing.

Tess (UK)

Very good pen, a great story, congratulations, keep up the good job, hope to see your next story soon!

I loved the story, only I would have left the permanent cuffs and Collar on I loved the idea of them.