All Comments on 'The Girl at the Platform'

Excellent job painting the darkness and her inner helpless struggle. I seldom give 5s, but I hope to give many more in this story!

Please continue to write this story. It will be interesting to see where you go with it.

Looking forward to the next installment.

As for the one anonymous comment, you may want to look up how to spell words before you use them as the title of your comment.

Thank you for posting your story. I really enjoyed your characterization such as even though the scenario was one of her fantasies, she struggled hard against him and sort/kind of tried to get away but then secretly held back because she knew she wanted this..sorry I'm retelling the story you know what you wrote but I really like that. I can't wait to read what happens next :)

This story is amazing, erotic, and simply got me off... Please write more of this story Iwant to know what he does to her and all!! U are very talented