All Comments on 'The Girl Next Door'

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vstarmpvstarmpalmost 11 years ago
Will there be more?

This has the potential for a short series of how he brings her into find her full sexual self. Mentoring and guiding her to learn what she wants, how to get it and at the same time having the pleasure of a young woman for whatever time it takes.

Great StoryQ

horney47horney47almost 11 years ago
Nicely done

could also develop this into one of those May/December romances.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
been there once

about 10 years ago-brought back some great memories and got me hard as a rock

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Great Story

would love to see this as a romantic short series

clive_iluvnycclive_iluvnycalmost 11 years ago
Great story

Hot and arousing. Hope you can see your way to more adventures with this pair. Thanx for all your stories.

Prolonged_Debut10Prolonged_Debut10almost 11 years ago
Are we going to...

...meet the parents? Very erotic, intense and well done. You should have popped the guy in the nose, for being an idiot.

NeverSaysNoNeverSaysNoalmost 11 years ago
Loved it!

Wish I had a neighbor like this, such a hot story! xo

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Parents?

We first met the mother, Veronica, and her two daughters, Beth and Meghan, in your story "The Neighbors" posted on this site in August 2009.

In the second paragraph of that story we learned that Veronica was divorced and had raised the two girls alone ever since.

This story has Meghan's parents going off for a Valentine's Day private love-fest.

UGH!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Damn, that was good!

***** Got to read more of your work. Thanks, tom anon

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Great!

Please give us some sequels.

And thanks for this fine story

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I wish it was me

It was AN AMAZING STORY!!!!

jimburr35jimburr35over 10 years ago
Great Story

As a guy about his age, I could really get into this story. One can dream.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I love this type of story.

I went back to school in my late forties. It was tough being older than some professors. Being around all those young girls sure was fun. You would be surprised the number of young ladies who came on to me. I ended up have a torrid affair with a cute little 20 year old redhead with a healthy set of DD's. I used to buy her tight sexy tops and loved to show her off in public. We were together for two years until she moved away. She came back after five years and we hooked up again for a few nights of no holds barred fucking.

tnadnudertnadnuderabout 9 years ago
Agree/Disagree

I agree it could be a good series or set... Except...

1] Found it ironic your first sure mistake was when you referred to someone as "to stupid"...

2] Next came the bartender giving "then" their drinks, & I noticed (but forget) a few after that.

*If you decide to write more (with Meagan, or the older stories with Donna, or any other female), consider this my volunteering to be an editor.

lolax2lolax2about 7 years ago
MORE¡¡¡

This need a part 2¡¡¡

starfish97starfish97over 6 years ago
Seriously?

You really expect us to believe that a single 40 something guy who has a hot 20 something girl wanting to fuck him, would say she needs to find someone her own age.

Ha ha ha fuck off.

No one, I mean NO ONE would say that.

3 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Chapter 2 PLEASE!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

5 stars!

Make a sequel!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

"... slowly slid up her back and across her ass."

UP her back and across her ass?

Is her ass on her shoulders then?

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