All Comments on 'The Girl Who Couldn't Say Yes'

Consider this a standing ovation

Started a little weak, but turned out to be very good. I'd be thrilled to see more stories like this, and hopefully longer ones.

Now that is how you get a fence white washed

Nasty Karl

very sexy and surprisingly humorous...good job overall

I loved your use of the first person in this one, and how you never once felt the need to explain the obvious. Great Job.

How ridiculous that you think you could get me to read this story and get turned on! Do you think I could ever be like that silly girl and get naked while keeping strong and only doing what I want to do? Do you really think too that you could get me to read to the end and then bet me that I would remember you had made me cum like a train? Of course I am not that gullible. A brilliant bit of writing, but I wasn't fooled was I?

A mind control with a twist ... very original funy and sexy. Could have been extended a little bit but hell that was a good one

Thanks & keep writting

Pure genious! :D

Nice work

loved this great bit of humor there as well

Very interesting way to take the mind control theme, reverse psychology! Love it, made me laugh.