All Comments on 'The Good Citizen Arrives'

by BTI1

Sort by:
  • 6 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Very good

A l ight and sexy read. It will be interesting to see the next installment

KamattlockKamattlockalmost 14 years ago
Nice continuatoin

That was a nice continuation to the first story and with the into you can enjoy this one without really having to read the first one but of course you would want to read the first part.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Awesome

I like the pace of the story and it is good. Can't wait for the next installment. Love it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
WOW!

Looking forward to the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Very well written and should make a superb series

michassmichassalmost 14 years ago
interesting although not convincing set-up

The story would sound a bit more authentic if it was set about 50 years ago--If they are so well connected to local companies and executives, 250 K would be a trivial sum. Also, it would seem that he is getting his money's worth in services.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous