All Comments on 'The Good Girl'

Very believable and that makes it a good story. The buildup was right on and the timing was perfect. Thanks.

Wow, that was really good, I think I had an orgasam at least twice. REally great job!

Good premise.

But REALLY lacks details. Particularly before the first jerking off to her.

She doesn't ask him if he's masturbated to thoughts of her. How often? When was the last time?

She doesn't ask him to show her how he masturbates.

She doesn't ask him what he likes about her body.

She doesn't direct him to masturbate in any particular way. Faster. Slower.

She doesn't ask him of he'd like to touch her breasts? Ass? Pussy?

Three stars