All Comments on 'The Good Neighbor Ch. 04'

the deceiver true to ones self only. TK U MLJ LV NV

Good story, with realistic, believble characters. I am looking forward to the next chapter. You certainly have room in your characters to have her feel some regret after David is out of her life. I hope you consider adding this emotion.

She is a cold hearted bitch that deserves everything she gets.

This women is a one hit wonder when the divorce is final and he decides to changer publishers she will really be up shit creek. It will be nice to see how his revenge takes. I hope he doesn't have to share his book royalties with her. Good Story can't for the next chapter.

Too bad David didn't take a knife to the whoring cunt - not to kill her - thoughshe deserved it, but to cut herface and body up so bad no man excepte a gutter drunk would find her attractive enough to fuck

Three good chapters hope to read more. One small points "tounge not tong". Love your name. Have a cousin in holland that has that name hope it is not you or maybe I should hope it is you.

Wait to see where everything goes from here. Does he leave her Publishing Firm in the Dust.

causing her to explain to the Partners where the Money went and where will she

get more to Replace the Loss of his books. and does he get it together and live well.

The wife is mercenary and a slut any payback would hopefully reveal her wanton character.

This is violence, pure and simple. There's nothing erotic about this chapter.