All Comments on 'The Good Old Boy Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
better and better

Chapter 1 was a little tough to read, but this chapter is awesome. More please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Loved it!

Very good story, well written, I loved the setting and the characters! Part 3 soon, please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Superfantastic!

Loved it! These characters are wonderful, makes me look at rednecks in a whole new light, lol.

SlickTonySlickTonyabout 20 years ago
Hot! Hot! Hot!

Rich in detail and very realistic! Carry on!

sacksackover 19 years ago
Help! I'm burning!!

A spicy pepper doesn't get hotter than this....MUST reading!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
^_^

Damn you! It's inspiring but rather distracting to end up so... erm, flushed... when I really should be writing. Even better than the first chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
protection?

just wondering.

Darby4186Darby4186almost 13 years ago
It always hangs better in the country

Wow, hot and happy!!!! I love the way you create a visual reality with characters you can feel sitting next to you. You have an amazing talent. I'm enjoying reading all of your offerings. Hope you continue writing new stories, too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

These "comments" from hotlover69 are like a dog pissing against a fence. They say nothing about the story - all they say is "I was here".

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
great story

I like these stories. They are MUCH better than the ones that are all " I fucked a boy" yo can envision it...T is like a movie!!! i am just wondering why this came up when I searched Toby Turner :/ Great story series though!

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