by carsonshepherd
Chapter 1 was a little tough to read, but this chapter is awesome. More please!
Very good story, well written, I loved the setting and the characters! Part 3 soon, please!
Loved it! These characters are wonderful, makes me look at rednecks in a whole new light, lol.
A spicy pepper doesn't get hotter than this....MUST reading!!!
Damn you! It's inspiring but rather distracting to end up so... erm, flushed... when I really should be writing. Even better than the first chapter.
Wow, hot and happy!!!! I love the way you create a visual reality with characters you can feel sitting next to you. You have an amazing talent. I'm enjoying reading all of your offerings. Hope you continue writing new stories, too.
These "comments" from hotlover69 are like a dog pissing against a fence. They say nothing about the story - all they say is "I was here".
I like these stories. They are MUCH better than the ones that are all " I fucked a boy" yo can envision it...T is like a movie!!! i am just wondering why this came up when I searched Toby Turner :/ Great story series though!