All Comments on 'The Good Old Boy Ch. 04'

Can't wait for the finish!

I laughed, I cried, it was better than Cats!

Go Carson!! A superb series worth exploring by gays and straights alike!

I'm a straight chick and even I'm totally hooked on his stories. I don't care how long they've been floating around on Lit, quality writing is difficult to come by, but an absolute welcome treat when found.

I'm puzzled- the story seemed to get garbled just past half way on page 2. He was talking to Nick in he stock room and then suddenly we're just trailing off in weird thoughts in his head. Then we end up with a wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am of some kind of fuck on his bed with Andy seeing and then even more garbled verbiage. This chapter needs some editing. And some better sex. Sorry it just doesn't measure up to your other writing.

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I am in love with you Carson Shepherd.