All Comments on 'The Good Wife: Resubmission Ch. 01'

I loved this story and can't wait to read more. Well done.

Do not like the content at all, but it is well written. Good luck with the story.

Hi, I appreciate any feedback. If you don't like something in the story, whether it be grammatical or content, please explain so that I can adjust and grow.

Thanks,

JMCroce

More please!

I loved it and can't wait for more. There were some typos that I can't remember now...I just wanted to finish. One suggestion I have is to watch what tense you are using. You have a tendency to slip from past to present tense, and that was a little distracting for me. But not distracting enough to keep me from wanting more! Please continue.

Nicely written story. I could not believe it when I saw the name of our hamlet, Palenville. I probably live about a quarter of a mile from you. Astounding.