All Comments on 'The Good Years Ch. 01'

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I liked it but i like sarah more.

Hooked from the first few sentences! The story is great, the characters are great (well...I don't like Mary so much, lol) Definitely will be looking out for the next part and yes! please.....longer chapters! This is a great story! You a an awesome writer dude! Thank you!

In most schools, football practice starts weeks before school starts, some even play a game before the classes start. This is true in Pennsylvania when the finals are carried on in December

nice story, got me glued to it from the beginning

Highschool football practice starts in the summer. Those kids are doing weight training year round when they arent playing a sport. No senior football player doesnt know when practice is starting. He shows up and meets the other people in his group and they act like they havent seen each other all summer. If he is a football player, a starter who splits QB, then he would be at least semi popular in almost any highschool, he would see people all summer. Details matter this is written by someone who either hasnt been in hs in decades or never went to hs in america.