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All Comments on 'The Graduate'

by Bakeboss

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AzPilotAzPilotalmost 14 years ago
Thanks for the chuckles. I laughed all the way through.

I like your humor and this story was another good example. Keep'em coming.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Chuckles is right.

Don't rush things, we like stroking stories here. A little dialogue too, eh? Good concept.

Alberta AlAlberta Alalmost 14 years ago
Good story outline.

Now you need to go back and flesh it out.

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