All Comments on 'The Grand Scheme of Things Ch. 01'

I think you got off to a great start. Please continue!!

your story has a lot of potential but it seem years go by before you finish them so what's the point of reading your stories. so the next time you're posting a story make sure you finish writing them first because if not I won't read them I like "Elysium" by the way too bad you never finish it.

Exceptional writing. I wonder why the long absence?