All Comments on 'The Guest'

I love stories about surrendering completely to sexual pleasure, and you're descriptions of Rachel's experiences and feelings are just incredible

extremely erotic , specially the lesbian sex

Every time I tried to get into it, you'd say something that sucked the "hot" right out of the room. ("Folds of skin"? Ew.) And if I never read the word "toy" ever again, it will be too soon. Overuse shows a total lack of talent. You're a passable writer, but you'd be great if you tried harder.

This is the first erotic story of yours I have read. I did enjoy it, although I think you tried to cover too many sexual and erotic desires too quickly. Spend a bit more time building the intensity, the sensuality, the eroticism of each "event", rather than racing ahead to get to the next.

But, hey, I loved it and have bookmarked you to read your previous posts.

Ciao

Hello Rachel Marie,

It's refreshing to find another author capable of writing a hot swinger story from a female perspective. Keep up the good work.

Your stories are so scorching hot and well written. Your passion just bleeds through them, so much so I want to eat the ever loving shit out of you ;)