All Comments on 'The Guide - A Halloween Story'

Good luck on the Halloween contest. Have 5 stars.

Good point about time. We as humans insist time only goes forward, but that is direct contraction of physics, making time not even one dimensional, yet we refer to time as the fourth dimension. We can conceive of time travel, but in general we experience the now, and the now keeps going into the future -- not sideways or into the past. Except for the spirit of poor Edwina here ...

I like the warning at the beginning, especially moving into the twenty-first century, but still think bashfullyshameless has the best ones. That said, I don't usually go for the BDSM stories, but you have written some really good short tales. "Gloriana" was nicely unusual, but I really liked "The Gift."

Clever premise! Well done! I like that echoing backward and forward in time concept. :)