All Comments on 'The Gun & The Whip'

As always TQ, great story! I know I enjoyed it and thank You for sharing it, allowing me to read it. Now, don't come after me threatening.... I mean teasing me, I voted my friend. *smiles* small Growl.... ~teddybear

You seriously need to take this "theme" to a full blown novel (of course for the huge general public the sex will have to be toned down slightly<GG>). There is a bit of the HP Lovecraft in your writing style along with Louis L'amour! In my opinion a great combination and I would love to see a novel from you on the book shelves!!

Keep it going and entrance us and keep us hoping for more!

I'm sorry, but the story was just great until the half animal things came into play. Just didn't work. Would have fantastic if half cat things had been brought into the picture throughout or not at all. Would have preferred not to see them at all.

I THOUGHT YOUR STORY WAS VERY WELL WRITTEN AND WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE. MAYBE YOU COULD MAKE A SERIES OUT OF IT. ANYWAY, I LIKED IT AND AM GLAD I TOOK THE TIME TO READ IT.

..i enjoyed rereading this tale, all in one sitting. thanks for posting this on lit and allowing the rest of the public to enjoy your talents. i'm looking forward to reading more of your works. *hugs* ranger

You never cease to amaze. The intricate web You weave in Your stories never fails to surprise. *soft laughter* and thank You for sparing Raj....again..lol.

will always be astounded at how Your stories just explode out of Your imagination.

What a story. It was the kind that just sucked me in. Loved it. Keep up the great work

Rog & Raj.

A good writer knows to begin a new paragraph when a scene or setting changes.