All Comments on 'The Hard Body Shop Clerk Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Excellent!!!!!

I like it very much.

One of the best stories of the site.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
It's called writers diherrea

That's when a really bad writer can't stop writing. He has no imagination at all...STOP now or you will continue to get negative comments

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Great chapter!

This is one my favorite chapters in the series. This, and the one where she's blowing Russ and Gerard in the shoe store...

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My stories generally feature exhibitionism and/or non-violent non-consent such as blackmail. I appreciate all feedback, both positive and negative, as I'm always looking to improve my writing. I also welcome feedback and suggestions for story ideas at dlsloan31@gmail.com.