All Comments on 'The Hartwell Plantation'

Brutal, but well written

The horrors that turn you on. Good luck and good riddance to bad rubbish.

But you're a sick fuck! And I don't mean that in a good way.

There is always a hated bad guy in the best of stories.

Each writer takes their own path with their imagination. Wait and see. You never know what may happen next.

There are many parts of the world where nastier things happen you just never get to see or hear about it. Get your heads out of your asses and grow up. This is fictional writing with a story that is not over yet.

I have seen far worse, sick and twisted writings in this forum, this is very light in comparison.

Clever tie in to the actual AtlasShrugged basis

Loved this! Want mooorreee!!

Awful enough to completely kill my lady boner. I think I may have to sue.

Great, please write more.

Whatever you imagined this story to be...it is simply not happening. You need to focus and polish this and by the way, erotica may not be your thing

Sounds like a Black fantasy, wan -a - be!

What about a part 2?