All Comments on 'The Hat Ch. 01'

by Ginny W.

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SamaelSamaelalmost 20 years ago
Yum

Very well written and can't wait to read how the weekend progressed!

Lord Master ScribeLord Master Scribealmost 20 years ago
Nice story

Was a little confused how Maeve just came out of a two year relationship with a girl and had never had lesbain sex???? Other than that it as a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

yeah cool pretty much sexual blackmail

fuck you

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 10 years ago
Good start of ...

what should prove to be a verrrry interesting weekend.

The only thing that threw me from the story-line was the oops about Maeve's lesbian experience. You'll sort that out before giving us the rest of the weekend, I hope.

Please keep writing.

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