All Comments on 'The Haven'

Can't wait to read more, rating is more like 95% though. I'll definitely be looking for more of your stories.

Is there more?

Would you develop this past the coming of the thaw?

warm, comforting, lovely story...Very well written, meaningful, and deeply emotional. Obviously not your first attempt at writing. I thank you for sharing this one... It is apparent you have much more to say - to share - hidden within...

Take care,

~Sky~

What a sweet, charming sensual story. What a lovely writer who makes use of the language. I can't wait for the next thrre or four chapters.

Richard

The title says it all. Im jealous of Kat already, and look forward to continuing that jealousy for (hopefully) many chapters forward.

Very good. Thank you.

Enjoyable read - thank you

Wow!

Now that was a love story. "The Haven" story in fact is one of the best works I ever had read on this site or any other. I hope beyond hope that this is start to Kat's and Gabe's story. Well done flamekitten ... well done indeed

Hellkite

... and what is more important, my wife liked it.

I thought it was brilliant, I really hope you write more about these two. Well Done

Very good especially for a first timer.I was almost worried you were going to fall into sentimentality at one point but you didn't.Think twice about it before considering any sequels .I think it concludes pretty well as it is.You've left enough "to sweeten our imagination"

I truly hope there is a sequel to this tale as there is an unfinished air about the peice,given their grave circumstances. Excellently written, good plot development and you creatively worked around the old 'let me just massage your back, honest, babe' ploy quite nicely.

The opening words of "The words were pouring out of her like milk from a breast",,,,, are almost as visceral as William Carlos Williams' "Red Wheelbarrow" Poem!

so much depends

upon

a red wheel

barrow

glazed with rain

water

beside the white

chickens

+++++++++++++++++++++++++

Now, I gotta go back and finish reading this little "romance" story. More deep comments later!

awesome story......i dont think it really needs a sequel, but if you feel like writing, go ahead...and i'll be sure to read it.

Its nice to have some sentimentality ( i'm not sure such a word exists, but it conveys what i wanna say) in a story...before they get down serious..anyways, i enjoyed it..so keep it up..

^_^

Kat's breath caught as she laid sight to his strong, muscular tone. She tried not to let her eyes stray, but she caught sight of it all, and compared him, favorably, to Peter

what a classy way of wording that! Superb!

HOT! And very sweet. You should continue their story.

Best I've read on this site. Perfecctly expressed the feelings and everything. Wonderful!

I'm ready again ? Those three words ? A nice story however Gabe is quite foolish to just take off in to the snow.

not long enough