by Sannion
I love demented and evil stories, but this one has taken the cake! 10 out of 10 for style plus several million for creativity. More! More!
Well written but the content lacks a certain punch when you throw carebears into the mix. I thought this was going to be a more humorous sort of story, carebears and cenobites seemed like a perfect opportunity for a laugh. For what it was it was okay but it just lacked the menace to be frightening and the horror seemed to eclipse any sexiness that you were trying to work in. Keep trying.