by Ashson
If you aren't Australian, perhaps you should put a little research into your story, or even not write a story based in a country you aren't familiar with?
I have to say, that whilst this is a 'rape' story, it is also quite funny...It would make a great film! Enjoyed it and please do more...
I like these "Stories"..? You know -- kinda off but yet again kinda on !**
( 5 ) all the way.!^