by Just Plain Bob
I don't know how I missed reading this story for so long, but I think it has the best punch line you ever delivered! Couldn't you have written even one more paragraph? In my own head, I complete the story with, "And they all lived happily ever after."
Five stars not enough! Bob has always had a great story telling 'voice' and this one took me right into the net! Did not see it coming until the last three paragraphs.
Why do you think this should be a trucker story? It specifically says "car." First chronologically in this series (Amy), she hitchhikes on a motorcycle. So what's with it having to be a truck?
Another story that shows Just Plain Bob is the King of Variety.
Paul in Oklahoma
“... the tags on your CAR ...”, “ ... put GAS in my tank ...” Stayed in motels. Shagged her in the back seat. Didn’t mind going no more than 200 miles on some days. None of those are things truckers do while hauling a load in a rig! Maybe a motel every once in a while, but not that often. Truckers use FUEL. Diesel fuel ... it is not gasoline and they don’t call it gas. They ‘get fuel’ rather than ‘gassing up.’
Didn’t see the ‘Sister’ coming, but the clue was there when he didn’t elaborate after asking where in Castle Rock her Sis lived. Only oddity was Hubby taking a lot longer getting home, apparently without calling in.
Hope the Girls’ Dad was wrong about Hubby’s occupation... but that is mushed up with taking three times longer getting to Mile High. Needed a plausible rationale for driving that far ‘to & fro’ ... maybe he was a teacher with the Summer off?
So a willing Cuckold brings home another cheating slut to make him a double Cuck!
Man is he in trouble. He should push Stephanie into the house and run for the hills. Give the two women time to talk and get reacquainted. Then give them a call and she if it's safe to come home. If not he could call Stephanie's husband and their Father and see which one turns up first. This story cries out for a second chapter.
Kinda figured that Rosalie was going to be his wife. I wonder that he never seemed to call her on the trip home to advise her of his progress. Did she ever wonder what was taking him so long to get home? And I know it isn't the JPB way but I sure would like to read a sequel wherein you heard the Sister's conversations, Hubbys 2-cents worth, whether or not Stephanie's husband found her and whether or not either of the men were tied to organized crime. SOOOOO many possibilities for a sequel.
Of course, I did not like the willing cuckold stories. I know that this is true of some men, I just don't have that particular kink. Other people might not like the few that I do have so I just let them do their thing and I do mine. Of course, if I am the third party and some other guy is being cuckolded and wants to eat my cum out of his wife that is OK with me but I don't care to watch or anything.
Best of the hitch hikers, I love most of your writing and this one was one of the best ...
Thanks!!!
except for the wimp husband allowing his whore to fuck around while he sat at home helplessly. Trend - what trend.
Loved the ending, JPB; I never thought about the amount of action truckers could get. I guess I'll shine up my Teamster's membership card and see what I can find....
named Rocco Gambellino! (I figured this out for myself - my mother didn't need to tell me!)
I assumed that her sister was his wife - I mean, Castle Rock is NOT that big a place.
I bet that was a fun few minutes when he came waltzing in the door!
Regards, DJ