All Comments on 'The Hog Bar'

by bragiragnar

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Absinth3Absinth3over 7 years ago
Excellent

Well done my friend

Nebel815Nebel815over 9 years ago
Great story

Very very good , enjoyed it and love the ending

bragiragnarbragiragnaralmost 10 years agoAuthor
Re: Chemistry needs some work

You never know...it might be a new cocktail...XD

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Chemistry needs some work

Try one part oxygen, two parts hydrogen. Unless you're drinking a glass of OOH ;-)

robindavisfictionrobindavisfictionalmost 10 years ago
Excellent

Very well-written and quite erotic. I liked both your character development and the plot. The ending was perfect.

bearsladybearsladyalmost 10 years ago

Excellent and erotic

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