All Comments on 'The Holiday Cruise'

Decadent lot. The type you want to run into on your world cruise.

...this was so well done! Beautifully written, almost poetic descriptions of feelings and sensations that only a woman can know.

I just returned from a cruise, I saw nothing like that. WIsh I had experienced some wild sex. This story was nice and I would have loved to see her spend another time with the family. Well written. Nice story line, almost believable

The way you expressed details with poetic harmony... I will definitely read this story again and again. Now, I am going to go through all the other stories writen by you.

Again your detailed descriptions of sensations is outstanding. You seem to realize that the senses, Taste, sight, sound and aromas enhance the total sexual release and you do a wonderful job of writing these into your stories. I also enjoy the use of words you have selected to describe the womans anatomy. I notice you avoid certain words such as pussy, cunt and use the more polite and anatomically correct words.......... If you could substitute some of these words occasionally it might add a bit more naughtyness to your fantasies........... again, I love your stories Sarah............ love Falcon

brilliant story Sarah as always you keep the story alive from start to finish.

there so much fun with having you around. and boy you really make read so very hot and horny leaving every one stiff and the woman cumming hard to very exciting love you for giving so much joy.