by Arkrhu
I'd love to read more like this, the focus on pantyhose is an obsession of mine and a major turn on. I love your work, I've read a lot of your others. Let your male characters impregnate their victims though, it would make a great story perfect.
Firstly, you stated that the attacker wore a burglars mask and then described his face-stubbled. That doesn't make sense.
Secondly pumps and heels are two different things. Another term for pumps are flat shoes i.e. Shoes without a heel.
Otherwise decent writing. Thanks for the slight foot description.