All Comments on 'The Hotel Room'

Great story, but the guys should have cum in their in-laws cunts.

That was a fun little read. What happens next? Do they cont. w/ each other, find new partners or does it all end here?

that Joe still asked if it was o.k. For him to be involved.

Here didn't just assume he would be alright if he took his wife. A bit of a crazy notion considering he just screwed Joes wife?

I think not, Jenna came over of her own free will, but I think he should have shown some restraint by not fucking Jenna in the first place.

IMHO

great story, really loved it, wished i was in this situation with my sis in law and her husband

I GIVE IT A 10 A FUCKING 10. BRAVO!! JUST WOW! this is THE FIRST story that had me captivated and intrigued to read more, and half way through i was in hand and just WOW marvelous job!! please give us more, Timothy mature_4_21@yahoo.com

Mmmmmm that was fantastic. If I might make a suggestion though, you should spice things up even more by having the men swing with each other too. Have your narrator be shocked when his brother in law starts sucking his cock and tasting his wife all over it and have him get into it too like the women did when they started getting slutty.

Just a thought...hope you continue the story.

I agree that this is a good sex fun story, emphasis on fun. Wife and I experienced the same scene with another couple sleeping in the same room. Started the same way, spoon fucking my wife etc. I wish it would've been her sister but it was great anyway cause my wife and the other woman did each other too. I get hard thinking about it. Gonna check your profile to see if you have more offerings. Thanks.

Great Story. A nice slow, gentle pace. One can visualize the whole scene!! Thanks.

After all that, the guys pulled out and didn't climax in their sister-in-law's pussy's!!!!! GET REAL!