All Comments on 'The House Guest Ch. 01'

I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. I think I have an inkling of who Ally's girlfriend is.

So good! Keep it up. Can't wait for chapter two

more focuse but still love to hear more may be chapter 2&3 ty yours leann

The story has serious flaws mostly due to the author needing education in the basics. All the frequent use of "...' and "word -- word" wrecks the content desire to read beyond very far.

Wonderful ! More please