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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Unique

That was certainly different and unique. I look forward to more of this series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
The I room

pure fantasy,but very good,this author could write some really erotic incest stories

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
nice

story worth reading

original idea

thank u..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
unique

I like the stories craftsmanship. please continue.

JustNTymeJustNTymealmost 17 years ago
loved it

It has a SAW like element to it. But erotic instead of horror. Nice idea. Look forward to future adventures.

mejau71mejau71almost 17 years ago
Remarkable

A beautiful and realistic story of true love that shatters the secrecy and mystery of a life long infatuation. Priceless… scandalous… awe inspiring…

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
OK, but was lacking something

This story has been done before. "The Perfect Couple" by Ms Jessica Trollop (on another site) is eerily similar, "A Tale of Forbidden Love" by mejau71 is similar and extremely well written. Rgjohn has a similar story where the mother and son are captive by another.

I was trying to find a new and interesting plotline. This story covered old ground without being very creative.

mrpervy46mrpervy46almost 17 years ago
Wonderful Imagination

Thank you for that imaginative story.Illustrations would have made it, incredible.

NiceGuyInVaNiceGuyInVaalmost 17 years ago
Magnificent Story

Very original, erotic with a feel good happily ever after outcome. You're a terrific writer with great creativity. Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Not so rare

This is an exellent story ,incest between mother and son can be the ultimate love.The act itself or the thought of commiting it is not so rare as we are led to believe.I am not talking about child abuse,but an act of love between two consenting adults,often initiated by the mother.I consider this submission not such a fantasy,lets have a sequel

GirlWatchinGirlWatchinover 16 years ago
Well done

The story may have covered old ground, but I enjoyed the approach. I thought your descriptions were very good, and the sexual tension you created was almost palpable. Over all, I have to give you a very well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Awesome!!

Amazing story! Truly Captivating:) Keep writing.

newtype2525newtype2525almost 16 years ago
Heartfelt thank you!

Absolutely incredible!

I can't thank you enough for this awesome tale!

I love the experiment angle! Even if the players were pre-inclined to incest, have you ever thought to play it clean? As in there were never having felt the pull? But as a reader I just have to thank you for such great stories and I hope to read more very soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Damn Good!!!!!!!!

Good story, but I would have f--k you up. 500,000 would have been spent tracking you ass down(smile) You know you write some of the best stories on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Son and Mom discover their basic urges

This is a fine story, no wonder, it's from the master. Mother and son are confined in a situation where they can't help showing and viewing what the other has between the legs. Danny, as a teenage boy, is constantly hard as he sees his mother's tits, ass, and above all, her glorious twat, which like every other son he's thought and dreamt about for years. Poor Dan is embarrassed that his big dick is always stiff in front of his mother, but Mom soothes him, telling her boy that it's perfectly natural for him to sport a hard on. It is, just as natural as his mother's growing fascination--and leaking cunt--with Danny's big prick and his potent balls. When Dan whacks off his Mom says, as her cunt spasms, I never knew a man could shoot so much sperm! His mother is as eager as her son is not to have him waste all that beautiful cum, but instead to shoot it up where it belongs--his mother's needy twat. Danny, now in control, tears up his Mom's cunt and finally creams his own birth canal! When "The (benevolent) Creep" frees them, it turns out that Danny-boy has fucked a baby up his mother's twat, and they'll be a proud and happy motherfucking family from now on!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
part 4

this is the great great story of mom son incest. this is like the movie SAW. the idea is one of the great in this

story but i-room part 2 and 3 is not good because

dad/daughter or other character is not attractive like mom son. mom son incest is the best attractive in incest world so allways be in mom son subject.please come back soon with part 4, where mysterious jigsaw kidnapped mother & son

and told them if mother get pregnant by the son than they will be released.

demantoiddemantoidover 13 years ago
"Feeling HOT HOT HOT! Yes sir"!

Great build up and a heartwarming ending. Well done!

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSabout 13 years ago

Quite good although I'm not a fan of bringing children into it

YoungStud23YoungStud23about 13 years ago
Awesome read!

I really enjoyed reading this. I hope you continue with the mother-son thing. If you enjoy foot fetish as well, check out my stories. Mom's Sexy Feet and More...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
a great story

wonderfully crafted story that i was happy to stumble onto.

kaamukkaamukover 12 years ago
So crazy and HOT !

What a situation to be in!!

Amazing story & a breath-taking read.

Keep it up. I love you.

BetterEndingBetterEndingover 12 years ago
Excellent

Great story. Was glad you painted the father as a total dick. That way the dissolution of the family was a good thing. And he was an idiot for ignoring a wife like that!

Much better than that whore wife trash. Thanks!

Rembrandt500Rembrandt500over 12 years ago
HOT HOT HOT

So unbelievably hot, my friend. I could sense the love between those two tangibly and fully, and I loved the sex scenes. Very arousing. :)

iloveiiloveialmost 12 years ago
just love it..

keep the gud work...and keep posting such masterpieces...

NYBossNYBossover 11 years ago

Contine with the series thinking about grandmother-grandson relationships or two mothers and two sons in the I-room together or mother, daughter and son in the I room together.

04JETTA04JETTAabout 11 years ago
Still.......

waiting on chapter 5!!! Read this chapter five or six times now, and it truely is a timeless classic!!!!!

xxxhornyboyxxxhornyboyabout 11 years ago
great series!!

loved all parts in the series.. I came so many times while reading those..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Fuck!

I fucking love this fucking hot fuck story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Better grammar, Please?

Good story teller, needs to improve language skills as some goofs are distracting from an excellent read.

devilspy2001devilspy2001over 10 years ago
Hot story

Keep writing, as your touch on touchy subjects. But all deal with lust and wanting what you do not dare to have. My personal favorite is fucking wives of men who freely give them to me. To fuck you my long thick meat and breed them. Some of the husbands are bi as myself and they suck and swallow loads. Some even have me fuck their pussy and stretch and breed it as I do their wives. Everyone getting what they need.

octabrainoctabrainover 10 years ago

Could you write an I-Room story about a brother and his younger sister who hate each other from childhood?

blkboneblkboneover 10 years ago
Great story

Love it....will be reading them all!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
old?

I agree that this story covers old ground. But, is that a bad thing? There is nothing new in this world, most especially having to do with the heart. Beautiful, but would be frightening. Here is another request, one window on real life. A beautiful maiden Aunt. A little on the zaftig side with flaming red hair, creamy white skin, and B cup breasts awakens in bed with her nephew (also a virgin). In the fullness of time, in the I room, she takes his virginity - as he pierces her Maidenhead. The story details are, of course, yours to create. Besides, the end result was(is)love.

ansdguyansdguyalmost 8 years ago
Still a great read.

We miss you Ahabscribe, wherever you may be.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wish you were here

Have enjoyed this several times, now. I think, really, it might take a little longer for this to happen in reality if it ever does. The Son would always give in, the Mother a maybe. If she is in a happy and satisfying relationship it would probably not. I think all sons love their mothers. Indeed they dream at some point of taking the father's place. They may not ever be able to admit this, even to themselves, but they do. And for good or bad, the boy's female intimates are forever measured against the standard set by the influence of the mother. Whether the effect is positive or negative. He might look to find a girl just like the one dear ole' dad married, or from guilt feelings or other reasons, might just go for the polar opposite. Whatever happens, I think that mothers and fathers totally ignore the influence they weild in their children's sexual lives. Most times, I have learned in my work, the offspring has a good or bad sex life for the rest of their lives almost certainly due to the sexual influence of the parents. Not what they teach - but what they do or do not. The Mother here is written to give her son a totally positive outlook on love, sex, marriage, parenthood, and committment. Kudos.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
So Good !!!!!

Very interesting. I hope your future chapters are as well. Good luck and never let your ink run dry!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Loved the simultaneous underwear removal scene between Joanna and Danny. That naughty perverted young stud was so hard for so long, that his cock simply could not handle it when he saw his mommy in all her naked glory. Poor kid blew his warm load all over her before he could even warn her about the massive pop shot. She should have gone down on her knees and cleaned his twitching cum leaking cock instead of freaking out.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The extremely hard cock Danny had between his legs when he took off his underwear and shamelessly exposed his naked aroused body to his own gloriously naked mother is somewhat fascinating to me. It's due to the fact that his cock was pointing straight up at his face just before he came and I know it takes an unnaturally stiff cock to do so, that just reminds me of how condemned young healthy men that are slowly and mercilessly strangled by the constricting noose hanged to death have similar cases of super hard cocks in their pants during and after their executions. The bodies of men being hanged have this erotic reaction due to blood being trapped in their lower body for too long as the noose makes their lovely bodies buck and jump violently while forcing their unwillingly hard erections to explosively blow their creamy loads in confusion and desperation during the final moments of life. However Religious people believe that the hanged man's impressive erection and spilled seed is proof of angel existence. They believe that the man reaches this unbelievable point of arousal and spills their fertile loads from their cock which is normally found pointing straight at the sky as a sign of respect and more likely due to indescribable beauty and erotic body of the naked angels they see when they die.

Danny similarly saw an angel version of his mothers body in his mind which was her naked form, thus forcing his body to coax out and spill his warm seed right in front of her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The phenomenon of men getting a throbbing erection and involuntarily spilling their salty warm cock seed as they are slowly strangled by the hangmans noose is called Angel Lust. It has absolutely nothing to do with this story, however as a woman, I can confirm and agree with you that watching a young naked man get hanged is quite fun and arousing to watch. Watching as their sweat glistened bodies tense up and jerk violently left and right as the tightening rope squeezes the life out them is the best fap material for a classy lady such as myself. Just love it when they helplessly pop a lovely boner and thrust their hips aimlessly at the watching crowd. Of course my favourite part is when their eyes bulge as their swollen tongue protrudes and starts to drool, because that's right before their soon to be dead thick cocks jerks and fire thick juicy ropes of pent up creamy cum as their bodies begin to go limp. Mhnmmmmmmm...............so fucking yummy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Different 5 stars again. Obviously you are obsessed with huge tits. I have read most of your stories and the smallest have been 38d up to 44ee though I can't see anything sexy about 44ee cow hudders. Keep writing though

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

To the obviously gay anon below......

Of course you don't like huge tits, you can't even spell udders correctly.

Stick to the gay section of literotica if you don't like the natural beauty of women.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I agree, screw the guy in the comments that is grossed out by large breasts. The fact that he called them cow udders is more than enough proof that he has a tiny little penis. He has never had sex with a woman in his life so he is resentful and insults fictional woman in stories. Not like he can do much with his ugly little noodle penis anyway. Stay out of this authors story archive if you hate natural big boobs, you impotent pathetic little man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

That underwear removal scene was so fucking hot.........

The description of Danny's naked young body made me so hot and bothered when he was introduced in the chapter. I was looking forward to him exposing his naked body to his mother with my clit throbbing pleasantly. And you did not disappoint when the time came for the big reveal.

7 mouthwateringly fat inches of throbbing rock hard boy meat is more than enough to stretch out and make a mature woman squeal and scream in pleasure. It was a nice and naughty reaction that Danny's big boner had as his eyes took in the naked form of his mommy standing infront of him.

The poor boy was a virgin before getting locked in the I room with his horny mother after all.

Danny's sexual arousal going through the roof and making his yummy cock which was saluting his own nude mommy rise up and harden to the point of making contact with his toned flat belly as his young healthy cum filled balls tightened in release to pump his cream up his virgin cock was sexy and erotic as fuck! I was gasping and then squirting in my panties in excitement when Danny's let out those sexy groans of primal pleasure as his diamond hard cock was jerking mighty to let out the delicious and slimy thick blasts of fresh warm virgin cock cream from the tip of his over aroused cock head.

If I was Joanna, I would have immediately licked the tasty coating of potent baby batter off Danny's gasping and flushed face before getting down on my knees to service his virgin cock with my cum hungry mouth.

Mmmmmmmhhhh...I wanna make Danny's eager and well endowed large cock pop in my mouth so bad right now.

Such a fine and sexy young boy. Joanna is so lucky to have him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Danny's a little bisexual huh. He sure didn't seem to mind when his fine cock bucked and spewed early to give him a delicious creamy facial before unloading the rest of the hot stuff on his mother's naked body during him premature ejaculation. There's no mention of him even wiping the cum off his face before trying to console his mother. Interesting.

Mr_BradyMr_Bradyalmost 2 years ago

Really enjoyed this story ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️❤️

kivancsifancsikivancsifancsi1 day ago

Szépen megírt eszmefuttatás. Elég lassan értek el a szexhez, de végre megtörtént.

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