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He drew out of her pussy and gritting his teeth, thrust hard into her small brown anus.
She let out a scream of pleasure and pain as he managed to get tree inches into her hot anus before he shot load after load of hot cum into her firm arse.
They lay there on the bed for at least an hour, wrapped in each others arms, each avoiding each others eyes. Finally Alice looked at the clock and let out a low sigh.
"I was supposed to be getting married at the church ten minutes ago."
Six months later she eventually made the church wedding but this time she had already given her virginity to the groom.
- COMMENTS
Chagrinedalmost 19 years agoBut you need to work on plot and English. Yes, I know you masters of mediocrity out there don't really think that we need to bother ourselves with the difference between bear/bare and whose/who's. But, really, if you can' put together a coherent that can appeal to someone beyond a Jethro Bodine 3rd grade education, you are not really a writer.
And we do need good plotting to make to story at least halfway believeable! I can't really buy that here is this girl who never swab the knob of the man she is going to marry and then in a few short minutes she is sucking on a strangers johnson? Bit of a stretch wouldn't you say.
Otherwise just keep at it and polishing your craft. Best way to do that is to write!
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoThis was a nice story. Those of you who are making negative comments should try writting yourself. This was the authors first posted story. You may critize someone but don't tear them down.
Giraffemanalmost 19 years agoWas ok, as storylines go. But I can't believe that a virgib bride who has been going out with intended hubby for all those years would ever capitulate to a quick fuck with a plumber. Too far fetched.
To all the anonymous critics. if you are gonna criticise the guy at least have the fuckin' decency to leave your name, and not hide behind anonymous. Cowards way out. Stand up and be counted.
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoIs every one on this site retarded or in sixth grade? Try doubt instead of dought you fucking moron, how is anyone supposed to take your comments seriously when you write like that?
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoi loved the way it started but the ending was too short you should of brought the bubby back
