The Imperfect Storm Ch. 01

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It was her panties. Green ones. And they were wet.

"I hope you're happy," said Missy, with mock anger. "They are soaked through and through. It's your goddamned story's fault."

Laughing, I picked them up, dangling them in the air.

"Go on. I know you want to sniff them." I do. I do want to sniff them.

Pulling them to my face, I inhale the strong aromas. Baby Sister Bitch's pussy aromas. Holy fuck.

"Ok, um, I need to go to the bathroom now!" And I was going to. Really. I have to fucking jack off or it may just do it all by itself. Spontaneous cum-bustion.

"Sit back down," said Stacy. "Ok look. Whit's our sister. We're not going to fuck with that. But, I don't think there's any harm in, perhaps, just looking. A little."

With that. Stacy opens her blouse to reveal a pretty, lacey bra. She unhooks the front of it, revealing her lovely breasts. Fuck. They're smaller than my Whit's, and definitely smaller than Melissa's, but size isn't everything. These are gorgeous. And Taboo. I'm not supposed to see these.

Melissa just yanks her/Whit's shirt off and arches her back, thrusting out her fantastic D-cups. Stacy reaches up and grabs Missy by the arm, pulling her on the couch so they are sitting next to each other.

"Your turn, stud."

I laugh and yank my shirt off.

"Ahhh, no. We can see that on any Saturday. Come on."

So I stood up. Kicked off my shoes. Unzipped my jeans, and stepped out of them. My raging cock pushed my boxers to their max, a wet spot clearly visible where the head is.

Melissa starts to get up, but Stacy holds her down.

"Go on." Says Stacy.

I shrug. What the fuck. Ya know? I bend over and take my shorts off. Now, I'm entirely naked except for socks. My cock stands straight up, saluting the whole room.

"Not bad, not bad at all", muses Stacy.

Our two couches are at angles. The girls are on one, and I'm standing in front of the other, I'm at most 2 feet away from Melissa. She's breathing heavy, her big tits rising and falling. Stacy grips her arm, keeping her down.

Melissa cups her breasts. "You like these, Trent. I know you do. They are right here. Come and get them."

"Trent!" snaps Stacy. "Remember Whit. Jack off, if you want to. We're staying here."

"Use my panties?" asks Missy. She's pouting.

I sit back down and start stroking my rigid cock. It's a little over six inches. Yeah I wish it was twelve. Or ten. But fuck, it seems to get the job done.

Pre-jizz is flowing out the top. I'm staring at the two sisters and the four boobs. Stroking my cock, Jesus it feels good. I want to fuck both of these sister bitches. But. Whitney.

Melissa now goes for it. Stacy leans on her, and they wrestle on the couch. Stacy has the height advantage, and she started out on top. She pins Melissa down.

"You'd better hurry. Trent. She's feisty."

Melissa struggles more and Stacy has to climb more on top her to keep her down.

"Get your tit out of my face!" cries Melissa. "I can't see!"

Stacy relents a little, Melissa turns her head and can now watch me jacking off. I'm very fucking close.

"Trent," whispered Melissa. "Look at my tit." Her one hand was tweaking and pulling on her hard nipple. She struggled more.

"I can't hold her forever, Trent," said Stacy, still pinning down Melissa. She mashed her tit back into Melissa's face.

Melissa found Stacy's nipple, and took it in her mouth. Melissa starts humping something, too.

"Hey!" cried Stacy. "Let go of that!"

Jesus Christ, Melissa is sucking on her sister's tit. That's all it took.

"FUCK! Yes! Yes! Ahhhhhhhhh!!!!" I yelled as I came like a bandit. Long ropes went up my chest and stomach. The hot cum felt good on my chest. Both Stacy and Melissa watched me with big smiles on their faces.

"My panties, Trent!" Oh, right. I almost forgot. I took Melissa's panties and wiped up all the cum off my body. I handed the dripping panties to her.

Melissa shoved the panties into Stacy's tit and her own face. She sucks on them. Obviously, she's getting some of my cum and swallowing it.

I'm mesmerized. I want to fuck both of these girls, badly.

The phone rings. It's Whitney. Fuck, Fuck!

"Hey baby! You're on speakerphone, the girls are here."

"Hi Whitney," they say in unison.

"Just wanted to see how things are going? Did you like your present?"

"Uh, just about to get to it, sweetie!"

Stacy points over to the table. She tries to get up, but Missy has her clamped down in an embrace, and she's humping Stacy's leg.

"Yeah... how's it going honey?" I'm stalling, trying to find the card for me. "We're uh, yeah, here it is... Oh hey! $100 Home Depot card! Awesome you guys, thank you!"

We chat for a couple minutes, then hang up.

Missy goes in to overdrive on Stacy's leg, and finally cums.

Stacy has this funny look on her face, you know, like the 'baby sister is bothering me again' kind of look.

Missy buries her head in her sisters tits and cums hard. Her body shuddering and her squeals somewhat muffled by Stacy's soft tits.

My dick is not soft. No, sir.

After Missy comes back to Earth, Stacy tells me to get my clothes back on, they're leaving now.

It's kind of weird, everyone putting their clothes back on and pretending none of this happened. Stacy starts talking about something inconsequential, Missy just sits there smiling in general. Some big hugs later -- soft, squishy hugs that were too long but also too short-- and they're gone.

Jesus, what the hell was that! One fucking minute I'm contemplating marriage, the next I'm jacking off in front of my girlfriend's sisters.

I make another vodka, and clean up the joint from all the chicken shit. 30 minutes later, my phone buzzes with the incoming message ding.

It's from Melissa. It's got a video attachment.

"hey stud call me when u see this!! <3"

Oh shit. But I have to watch it. I click the video and it starts with a shot of Melissa's face.

"Hey Trent. Just got home and I have to tell you... mmmmmmmmm. I loved your story. I only read part of the first chapter but Jesus, guy, you got my motor running! Look!"

The screen jiggles and goes light/dark/light as she moves the phone around. The screen re-focuses. She's holding the phone in front of her shaved pussy.

"See?" she says as she spreads her pussy lips open. "See these fucking juices? They're from tonight. See how wet my fingers are? Mmmmmmmmm I'm gonna taste them, watch me.

"Yes mmmmmmmm so good. You want this, you know you do. And hey, look at this! It's my tit! Let me lick it a little. nnnnnnnnnnn you like that? Call me!"

Uh no. Not going to call you. I'm going to text Whitney and profess my undying love for her.

Or. Or I could call Melissa and tell her to stop bothering me. Yeah, that's it!

"Hey Little Miss."

"Trent, mmmmmmmmm, I've been frigging myself since I got home. Did you like my video?"

"Well, sure. But you see we can't do this..."

"We aren't doing anything," she said, cutting me off. "We're just talking. You liked seeing my tits, didn't you, baby."

I didn't answer. If my cock could talk it would've answered.

"You're not gonna talk to me? Trent?"

"Melissa. I'm in love with your sister. I can't..."

"Ok I'll talk then. You listen. Listen to this." I could hear what seemed to be sucking noises. "I'm sucking on my big tit, Trent. And listen some more." Now I could hear squishy sounds. "That's my wet cunt, baby. Ooooooh so wet. And it tastes soooooo goood, mmmmmmm..."

I had to let my cock out. It wasn't my fault. It hurt inside my pants.

"I'm rubbing my cunt, Trent. I'm going to cum for you, would you like that?"

"...yes..." I answered, barely.

"Oh baby I'm going to do it. I'll cum for you. Stroke your dick baby. I know you are. You can cum on my tits. Cum on my face. Ooooooooh cum in my mouth baby. I already tasted your cum, Trent. You liked that, didn't you baby?"

"Yes, Little Miss." Look at me! Speaking up and all. I walked to the kitchen so I could shoot my load on the kitchen floor. Easy clean up.

"You liked watching me suck Stacy's tits. Mmmmmm they were so soft. She pretended she was mad but she wasn't. She was sopping wet, Trent. I came while I sucked her tits, baby. Mmmmmmm do you want to fuck my ass baby? You can, baby. I'll lick your cock when you're done fucking my ass."

"Fucking Christ..." was all I managed to say as sperms flew across the kitchen in spurt after great spurt. Holy fuck. Whit and I have had phone sex before, but not like this. Jesus.

"Are you cumming baby? shooting cum? Me too... mmmmmmmmm shit yes! Fuck!... Fuck!!... Fuck!!... Yesssssssssss! Oh baby!!"

I didn't know what to say. I'm beyond skating on thin ice. I'm up to my neck in it.

"Thank you baby, thank you Trent."

"Missy, please don't tell Whitney."

"Sure baby. You just go on and don't think about me... bye baby..."

Click.

For a 20 year old, she has got it going on.

I cleaned up the mess. 3 paper towels. Brawny, too. The whole house smells like sperm. I don't really even know how much trouble I am in, but it is a LOT.

The phone rings, who can it be now? Christ, it's the other sister bitch.

"Trent! Don't you even say 'hello'?' Sup you dawg?"

"Nothin'."

"Nothing? Melissa told me she just talked to you. Sounded pretty hot."

I just sighed into the phone.

"I re-read the story again," she started. "You know, there are some, uh, surprising similarities between your characters and us three sisters."

Whoops. She noticed.

"So I'm the sister who you're sort of in love with, but not the one you end up with."

"Look, Stacy. It's just fantasy. I may have borrowed some elements from real people here and there but you can't just say that one character is completely based on --"

"Right... don't give me that crap. Wait til Missy finds out what you did to her."

"Oh come on, that's not fair. Raquel isn't her!"

"Right. Bubbly, big-boobed, a little ditzy, very sexual. That's not Melissa at all."

Well, she had me there.

"I can't defend everything. It's just a fantasy story, like I said. Uh... Did, did you want something?" I was tired and didn't need to be harangued at this hour.

"Yeah. I want to show you how you need an editor."

"I know I do. I told you I'd work with you again next project."

"Yeah, but I've got to show you some things. Open the 'Storm'. Chapter 3. Page 2. I'll wait."

"Fine." It took a few moments to get logged in, and to find the story. I didn't talk and neither did she.

"Ok got it. Page 2. What."

"Ok look, your stupid, lazy capitalization kills it. You almost never capitalize your 'I's."

"i do too!" i retorted.

"Alright, scroll down, about halfway. Where it says 'He kissed his sister's lips..."

"... ok... got it."

"Read it. Out loud."

"He kissed his sister's lips, his own lips and cheeks--"

"Stop. Read it like, like you're reading to an audience. You know, act a little, pauses and stuff. Read it."

"Fine."

He kissed his sister's lips, his own lips and cheeks covered in her pussy juices. She eagerly responded, and licked and swallowed down her orgasmic honey. She struggled against her silken bonds, unable to free her hands.

"Please Tony, let me loose so I can--"

"Shhhhh" I said to her. "Did you like that, though?"

"Oh God yes baby! You ate me out s-o-o-o-o good. I came so hard... oh... look who's here!"

I maneuvered my cock so it rubbed on her pussy. Rising up on one arm, I reached down and guided him by hand. Just spreading her pussy lips a little, covering my cockhead with girl juice. Rising up slowly, climbing up her pussy so my cock tickled he clit. The heat coming from her cunt is amazing. I lower back down, her pussy is so slick that my cock slides halfway into her vagina.

"...yes..." she whispers, gazing into my eyes. 'Gazing'. Sounds stupid, but that's what she was doing.

I paused. I could hear Stacy breathing in the phone.

"Why did you stop? Keep going!"

"Really?"

"Yes, really! Asshole! Don't stop till I tell you."

My cock in place, my hand went back to the bed, I lowered my body completely on top of Tracy, but kept my cock where it was. About halfway in.

Kissing my sister some more, I pulled my cock out a little, then pushed in farther. Back and forth, slowly, going a little deeper each time, filling my sister's cunt with my amazingly hard cock.

I hit bottom, as far as I could go. My right hand reached under her ass so I could pull harder. My left hand went to her beautiful tit spilling out on her side.

We started fucking, slowly, at first. Our kiss ceased as we needed our mouths for breathing. I collapsed entirely on top of Tracy, now, both hands on her luscious ass. Her fucking crack slick with her cunt juice.

Her tight, slick pussy felt like hot liquid satin against my cock. Our hot bodies pressed against each other. Tracy struggled, to no avail, as her hands were bound to the wooden frame of the bed. Deeper, and harder, and harder still I rammed cock into her.

"... Tony!... oh God oh God ... shit..."

"Baby you feel so good! I fucking love you!" I cried out as I fucked her and kept fucking her.

"Tony... fuck my cunt baby... Fuck it! yes yes oh God oh God oh God! Fuck me harder"

I slipped my right middle finger between her ass cheeks, and onto her butthole. Pressing just a little bit, it went easily. My finger could feel my cock through her pussy walls, and vice versa as I rammed her with everything I had.

Panting, I asked my sister, "Are you my dirty girl? Huh?"

"Yes oh god fuck yes!"

"Are you my dirty sister?"

"Jesus Yes!"

"You like my cock don't you!"

"I Fucking love it!!"

"You're my little slut, aren't you?"

"Yes Tony yes... I'm a slut for you."

"My finger is up your ass."

"Yes baby! Shove it in harder!"

I shoved another finger into her ass. She screamed bloody murder.

"Scream more, Slut! No one can hear you! Scream!"

And she did. I think the people two miles across the lake might've heard her, but they wouldn't know where it was coming from.

"Tell me who you are!"

"I'm your slut! I'm your slut! Your fucking sister slut!"

Jesus I couldn't take it any more. My cum was building to a crescendo, fast, and was only seconds away.

"I'm going to cum in your slutty cunt, Tracy!"

"Jesus! fuck yes cum cum cum oh god oh god YES, YES, YES!"

Her tight cunt gripped my cock in trembling waves as she came. My semen fired deep into her cervix, my cock throbbing pleasurably with each load. I came in my sister's cunt. Yes... YES!! FUCK YES!! I am the FUCKING MAN today!!

I eventually pulled out, and cupped my hand near her pussy. Our honey dribbled out in little spurts. Using my other hand, I held open her pussy, trying to get it all out. My cupped hand held a few tablespoons worth of cum, both hers and mine. I brought it up to Tracy's mouth.

"Open." She did.

I tipped my hand so about half of it poured into her open mouth. She greedily swallowed. Then I took my hand and turned it over quickly and smeared it all over her face. I slapped her cheeks lightly, but enough to get her attention. Then I slapped each tit, much harder, several times.

"You're not going to deny me anymore, are you?"

"No. Never."

I slapped her tits more.

"Are you sure?"

"Tony, i'm yours. Take me as you will."

I paused. Stacy was just breathing heavily into the phone and saying things like "Whew" and "Jesus" and such.

"You okay over there?"

"Yeah, sure. That just makes me cum every time. But to hear you read it to me, that made it soooo much better."

Sigh. Now my cock is all hard again.

"So, what was the problem? Editorially speaking?"

"Oh yeah. That last line? You didn't capitalize the letter 'I'."

"Oh, right. And so, I had to read the whole thing for you, just for that."

"Hey, a girl's gotta do, ya know?"

"Yeah, I guess I know."

"You've got to tell Whitney about this story."

"Yeah, maybe. I don't know."

"If you don't, I will."

"Great. Threaten me. that's all I need, Tracy/Stacy."

"So, Trent, you gonna tie me up and make me your slut?"

"Haven't decided."

"Well, think about it, buster. You should've had Tony fuck her in the ass. People like ass fucking. And you know what else? Your whole first chapter was just masturbation, no fucking. How can you write erotic stories with no fucking?"

"It's a goddamned struggle, I shit you not. Good night, Sister Bitch Slut." See how clever I am with the words? Even late at night. I just made that up. Sister Bitch Slut. I like it.

"Goodnight, fucker."

"You wish."

"Yes, Trent. I do wish..."

I put the phone back on camera, and found Missy's video to me. I watched it three more times and rubbed my cock until a small amount of cum leaped out. There wasn't much left.

Holy shit, what a day.

- - - To be continued - - -

- - - Slowly - - -

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ScottishTexanScottishTexanabout 1 year ago

I liked the trope of the parallax story inside of the story. That's a nifty twist. But I don't like the running around behind Whitney's back. Even though they were limiting contact in an effort to respect Whitney, they all three still crossed over the boundary and broke trust. They could have discussed the story with their clothing still on, and then discussed approaching Whitney to discuss solutions for moving forward towards getting intimate. But the mutual masturbation in the same room and texting dirty movies went too far. 😒 There was a better way to approach the problem without the potential for damaging relationships and hurting feelings. 3/5

muskyboymuskyboyover 1 year ago

Too slowly for me...

Hiding_in_PortlandHiding_in_Portlandabout 9 years ago
Second time through.

Reading this story for the second time and it's as good as the first.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggabout 10 years ago
worlds colliding !

Fiction versus real life, reliable long term ( but is that 'zing gone')girlfriend versus her avid sisters whose staying powers are yet to be determined. Loving the paradoxes. A fine mess of a story *****

tranzmanytranzmanyabout 10 years ago
Very meta

I am enjoying the meta element to your story. I love how you comment on your story in your story. Thank you.

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