All Comments on 'The Internet is a Big Place Ch. 01'

Wish it was a tad longer but I know how many of you just don't have the time to pen anything too elaborate. Then there are those authors so unsure of themselves that they need constant validation before they proceed any further. Whatever the situation in your case, I hope you do a second part soon enough to bring some closure but I see enough of an idea here to provide enough material for seven chapters.

signed TLD

where are you going here. you left to much out of this short .

Too short with no indication where this is headed. I'm not even sure what to rate it.

What is this? Will we know it after sequel ?

You can't see that this will eventually end up being his girl?

Wow, her breasts are HUGE lol

Where oh where is chapter 2.

Author proly abandoned the story .

Low ball voting by LW trolls & vitriolic feedback sometimes do work

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good quality writing & a plot idea that although similar to many other stories , it is still one that has not been repeatedly done to death like some ideas.