All Comments on 'The Interview'

by Spookymuffin

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AnomolousCowherdAnomolousCowherdover 17 years ago
A certain irony

At one point Gina thinks "...no man had ever made her feel like this. They were too quick to get to fucking...." Ironically, that also describes this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Seconded

This really had the potential to be a sweet story, with a different take on a typically tired setup. The sex just felt way too rushed. I think you should alter the story so that there's some time to build tension. The knee-kissing was very cute, but take it slow after that!

Aurora BlackAurora Blackover 17 years ago
Your story

Has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews thread on the Lit forum (Author's Hangout)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
pussy grinding hot!

It made me sooo hot reading this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Just what I thought of it

Personally I liked this story. I thought that it was short but very sweet. And I can't forget to mention sexy!

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 12 years ago

A hot little story. Chapter 2 please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
From a Limey!

Bloody Brilliant!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Write

More. Please

foxyfowlerfoxyfowleralmost 3 years ago

Cannot wait for more from these two young ladies please brilliantly written.xxx

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