All Comments on 'The J-Girl Model Ch. 03'

I read all three chapters tonight and found myself immersed in a world I didn't want to leave. The depth of your characters and storyline, up to and including Sato's detail into leadership (something I know alot about) was very well done. I might even go so far as to say masterful! You infused raw lust, conflicting emotions, and calculating defensiveness into Hanako's personality, while not losing her small town romantic want for a happy ending... and that's what makes for a good, if not great read!

WTF was that? It just made no fucking sense. What was the point of this shit?

is not for everyone. It clearly states that it is non-erotic from the get-go. I decided that was the way the story had to be, and I am happy with it. If felt you were short-changed, and wondering (as the story wound down) WHERE in a bunch of karaoke you might find a smutty sex scene, I can see how the ending would disappoint. I don't get much feedback but one or two readers have asked me to continue the series, and/or offered a few story ideas. I'm still working out the details, but if Hanako is featured again, it won't be a non-erotic!

This is definitely one of your better stories in Lit. I love how multidimensional you made the characters feel! If you want to do spin offs with them, I'll absolutely read them.