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"Not ready for love, eh?" I said as we strode to our room.
"That's not what I meant. Maybe I am. You and Sato though, I mean - hey, isn't it early?"
I just smiled reassuringly.
"What of your cabana boys?" I teased. "They looked about ready to tear your dress off."
"About that. I told them my room number so I need about an hour and a half to get railroaded. You can wait in the hallway."
"You did not."
"Okay, you got me. I barely got out of there though, it was fucking close. Oh, it was grand fun, sweet tits. Reminded me of my stage days."
As you can imagine, we made passionate love that night. I didn't ask for commitment, and she didn't offer. She asked me again about Sato. I simply told her that all I wanted was already in my arms, and if it stayed that way forever, it would be perfect.
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Thank you for reading this, the last in a three part series. I still want to describe what happens between Hanako and Sato. Also, I still would like to tell the story of Akiko's origins and experiences. There is room for a smutty spin-off or three. Please let me know in the comments what you think.
- COMMENTS
NigelBearover 8 years agoThis is definitely one of your better stories in Lit. I love how multidimensional you made the characters feel! If you want to do spin offs with them, I'll absolutely read them.
wet_specialover 9 years agoAuthoris not for everyone. It clearly states that it is non-erotic from the get-go. I decided that was the way the story had to be, and I am happy with it. If felt you were short-changed, and wondering (as the story wound down) WHERE in a bunch of karaoke you might find a smutty sex scene, I can see how the ending would disappoint. I don't get much feedback but one or two readers have asked me to continue the series, and/or offered a few story ideas. I'm still working out the details, but if Hanako is featured again, it won't be a non-erotic!
Anonymousover 9 years agoWTF was that? It just made no fucking sense. What was the point of this shit?
OneIBlindalmost 10 years agoI read all three chapters tonight and found myself immersed in a world I didn't want to leave. The depth of your characters and storyline, up to and including Sato's detail into leadership (something I know alot about) was very well done. I might even go so far as to say masterful! You infused raw lust, conflicting emotions, and calculating defensiveness into Hanako's personality, while not losing her small town romantic want for a happy ending... and that's what makes for a good, if not great read!
