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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

It's good as always, funny really I always get a hard on with this story cos I relate to it, my hubby is just like dom fit muscular and short but got is he hot even after 24 yrs together, Jonathan in the UK

Brahms21Brahms21almost 2 years ago

Aww I love how Bo had a chance on his love life❤ but fuck Burgess😆

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I wish bo bottomed …..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Mmmmmm...

That Burgess was a nasty piece of shit!

Spadger2Spadger2almost 5 years ago
The Right Partner

Once more, Rob, you are able to match up two very compatible people. The whole gay thing is a little beyond my comprehension, but I can understand how two men could be so attracted to each other, as you depict in so many of your stories.

Thank you again for the pleasure you give and the characters you create. I feel sure that most of them must be based on real people. They are all so graphically depicted.

Much Love and blessings to you from Patrick.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
GOOD STORY

This is a good story. How about more as Bo and Dom go on in a life together?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nope

The comment about Bo bottoming

Nope just nah it would kinda ruin it.

But mmh why not..........

SunnyvibrationsSunnyvibrationsabout 6 years ago
I wanna see Bo bottom

Cm on, who doesnt?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
What's missing

Firstly; why have you stopped writing Mr Robocup? I hope you are well. Your writing is good for our spirit. Some of us, read and reread your stories, it's a great testament to your talent as a writer. You haven't posted anything since 2011, and we keep reading you and commenting on your wonderful stories. It's about time you post something new.

Secondly; I personally would like to see more versatility among your characters.

In hetero normative, it's common to have gender role personification. It's something taught, if you are male, you are expected to behave "macho", with all the nonsense to prove your masculinity, and vice versa with being female and somewhat being submissive.

We don't have to conform to these so called normatives. What's make you a man, it's your character, not your sexual prowess and or physical abilities. Don't get me wrong, I know well that some of us have our preferences, but in a relationship, whatever the sexual orientation of the partnership is, it's the sharing that should be prioritized not what's expected of anyone, according to the societal normative.

Why haven't Tony, Bo and in another of your stories, Rich never reciprocated ? It would've been nice to see more intimate role reversal among your characters.

Thirdly: not missed but wished or mostly expected, where it goes from where you concluded those stories.

Do you remember how Bo wished to have what Bobby and Tony had while they were holding AJ's baby. And later, how you made us feel so good with the Paolucci parents being affectionate, affective.

So here are some suggestions for next stories. The first time Bobby was intimate with Tony, he was so pleased and happy, that he blurted out to Bobby "marry me ", and didn't AJ asked Bobby if he wanted to be married and have a family with his brother? To witch Bobby wasn't adverse. Marry Bobby and Bo to their lovers and make them parents.

Also you could have Nate and Rich married and raised a family, and work them to be a little bit more versatile.

Some spiritually wouldn't hurt either.

I am, among all of your fans and avid readers, hoping you will consider returning with some more food for thoughts for us. Blessings.

Spadger2Spadger2over 6 years ago
Keeping it in the Family.

Looks like Bo is maturing at last, and starting to consider others and not just himself.

How great that he decided to accept the Christmas invitation to visit the Paolucci family, and be accepted by Tony's parents and siblings.

It seems as though Bo and Dom were meant for each other.

Not a story of great excitement, but one of caring and loving - not just sexual love, but real filial and family love.

Thank you again, Robcub32, for your wonderful characterizations, and the wonderful way you portray them - e.g. Dom's wonderful accepting parents and siblings, and also for including Tony and Bobby interacting with all the other characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
To that particular someone who said Bo's a "bitch"

You have no right to say that and compare yourself to him. True, what he did was a top grade duchebag move but it was under the spectrum of "understandable". He was an pro athlete who had a leg injury, his life and future as a player was forever lost so that compared to a colorectal surgery is not on a same page unless you have a career that deals and affects that part if your body. And bare in mind that people handles grief diferently. So yeah.... thats it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
So glad...

Oh so glad to see Bo get his own happiness. I know he and Bobby were in love in college and Bo done him wrong, but it works out well in the end. Love Dom and Bo together, and hope they will love and grown in love together.

Love ALL your writing...the hairy chests, big cocks, and real love that developed!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Dream life

The best ever story I have ever read,left my eyes wet,cried a river

For not being able to live that life here!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Bitch

Bo is a bitch! OK so he thinks his life is over and no I haven't had an injury like his. But I did have a major colon operation and got the scar to prove it. I didn't treat people the way he did. I hope he gave a deep apologies to Darren and the other physios ,since they were only trying to get him on the road to recovery, it wasn't just Dom. Yes I know Dom gave him meaning but he did not have to be a arse hole to the others. But no one is perfect. happy new year you all😁

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Please please please!!!

Please consider expanding on Bobby, Tony, Bo and Dom! We are all dying to know what happens with these 4! I love them all so much (Bo is my favorite! From the very first Bobby story I adored Bo and I never held them not working out against Bo, yea he messed up but he also genuinely cares for Bobby! They were a great first love but never meant to last. I love how things work out!!! I love how one thing leads to the next and now you have two fantastic couples and four men who really love and care for each other and are family and I think that's beautiful :) as for the idiots who bitch and whine about Bobby crying SCREW OFF YOURE ALL WAY BIGGER BABIES THAN HE IS! No... Robcub is not saying twinks are cry babies some people are more emotional than others Bobby happens to wear his heart on his sleeve ... Dom is no where near as outwardly emotional HE WILL BEAT SOMEONES ASS! and they both are twinks... I've known a few big ole bears in my life who are emotional... Who cares ? Different strokes for different folks!!! ROBCUB you are amazing and we all adore you once again please consider updating these guys! Thanks bunches! C

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
sequels

I agree with the others. Bobby, Tony, Dom and Bo. They are relations with their partners. Nice to expand on their progress, perhaps marriage, children, They are four good guys, like to hear more how their lives progress Nice to hear if Dom and Bo work on getting jobs in their area. Hope you let us know more about the fab four.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

you need to write more stories.? there the best on this site

ADpenthouseADpenthouseover 8 years ago

sequel.

marriage and adoption for bobby & tony.

further growth in the relationship between dom & bo. and bo should once bottom for dom.

as dom isn't a complete bottom.

so please a sequel is needed. and dom and bo's story was much more better than bobby's.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Fantastic

Love your writing. The stories are so real, sexy, and a pleasure to read. All the great sexy details, but also the bigger picture of love. Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Such a great story.

I hope you will continue to write about The Paolucci brothers and their loves. Perhaps the next story could involve a wedding, and an adoption. I think Tony and Bobby are at a point in their relationship where those are the next logical steps.

Haphaestion2004Haphaestion2004over 9 years ago
Really great !

Actually, I quite agree with @Fantasyboy69 (01/06/14) - Dom IS "a passive DOMinant bottom", "he is a guy who likes what he likes".

As an anime/manga and fanfiction fan, I would say Dom is a uke with the soul of a seme - [words of japanese origin used in this type of fiction; uke, meaning the bottom or the passive in a Yaoi (boy's love) relationship; seme, meaning the dominant partner in this same Yaoi relationship]. Sorry, I don't mean to be fussy, but this is what I was thinking about when I was reading about Dom ! I liked him so much ! He was sensitive and warm hearted without being effeminate or feeble ...

I'm certainly glad he thumped his ex, and especially that he decided to give himself and Bo a chance at happiness.

Having said all this, I don't mean to say I don't like ukes like Bobby, Micky, Benji, Davey (even Mason or Paul) - I love them all, they just have a different personality from Dom's; besides, (sounds crazy ?) I consider them my friends - I had such a good time when I met all of them ... and their semes too !

Anyway Rob, thanx again for making my hear all toasty again. You never fail !

judojonjudojonalmost 10 years ago

what a great read do hope that you continue with tis as i would like to see it go onto something more . again great job

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wow...

This is amazing!!! I just wish there was a sequel... A really really REALLY beautiful story! But it feels like it's a little incomplete... SEQUEL!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

i love this story! i think it would me amazing in doms pov. to see what he thought and his story would be interesting :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
This...I like this

For the first time in memory I like the bottom more. He's not a wuss, his not fem. He's a passive DOMinant bottom...pun intended. He's a man who likes what he likes and that's something most writers don't get. Thanks for this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A refreshing Twist

I like that the story is told from Bo's POV- that he owns up to both his strengths and shortcomings, good, bad and ugly. It makes his personal growth real and touching. And I liked that Dom was no wimpering flower, but a guy who can dish it out when needed. And Tony & Dom's family is brilliant; we should all be so lucky to find unconditional love. And hooray for AJ.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Bo seemed like a sweet character in the earlier stories, and Bobby and Tony are both so likable, I confess I didn't expect Bo to be so selfish - or such a meanie - wow, what he did to Darren at the beginning was pretty despicable! I enjoyed the story, and I see it's popular, but I can't help feeling that maybe (don't shoot me) Dom deserved better? I understand that as an ex-major sportsman, Bo would need to have a certain amount of big-man-ego about him, but he needs to give a little more in this relationship, somehow. Any chance of further stories about Bobby and Tony? There aren't nearly enough stories here that are "romances" - although many rather optimistically tag themselves that way . . .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Such a great story...

...but I agree with Timothy that Dom should give as well as receive loving. Other than that, I loved this.

TimothyMTimothyMalmost 12 years ago

I enjoy your stories, and this is one of the best, but more than any other case the one-sided sex seems silly, considering how Dom is described. And Bo has such a caring and sensitive side, that I find it hard to accept that he would not want to show his love for Dom by receiving as well as giving. It would have been the perfect contrats to the abusive ex-boyfriend and a very good way of gaining Dom's trust.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
loved it :D

but I was just wondering did you change his name from tom to dom- it sounds so weird x.x

but other than that, it was great!

andy190andy190about 12 years ago
Thanks

I know you have had great reviews and comments but I wanted to say "THANKS" It is such a sensitive piece of writing - it made me cry more than once - and had me jacking off too! YOU ARE GREAT AT THIS AND I BET YOU ARE A FANTASTIC LOVER TOO. Please continue to give us this quality writing. It is such a privilege. THANKS.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Wow

This is some amazing quality work. The characters, all of them, have such great depth. Bo is a truly complex individual, I just started reading all of your works and I'm loving them all. You're a very talented person :) Keep it up! (No pun intended)

seahavenseahavenabout 12 years ago
A Definite Favorite.

I absolutely love your writing; especially with this piece. It's easy to read, without being 'low level'. The characters have so much depth, and I always turn to this when I'm looking for a quick favorite. The sex is super hot, too.(;

Love it.

hk47enclavehk47enclaveabout 12 years ago

This story was just damn amazing. So great!

I read the other Bobby stories, so I was happy to see that Bo found someone of his own now.

:)

FuckLikeAPornStarFuckLikeAPornStarover 12 years ago
you're just the best rob

Time and time again you amaze me with your writing. This one so emotional, you just sucked me into it and had my crying a little when they had to leave each other to go back home. I think out of all your stories, this one is my favorite <3

PRPrincePRPrinceover 12 years ago
Amazing!!

This was a truly amazing story!!

heatherleigh24heatherleigh24over 12 years ago
Congrats

Congrats on your win for Best Gay Male Story in the 12th Annual Literotica Author Awards.

alexandra36alexandra36over 12 years ago
CONGRATS, Rob!!! Yayyyyy!!!

You won! You won!! You won!!! Ummm..what do you get anyway? LOL.

Loved all of your stories and am totally in love with Colton and Parker now!!

CONGRATULATIONS!!! :)

Rockyroads50Rockyroads50over 12 years ago
Congratulations!

Congrats on your win in The 12th Annual Literotica Awards: Gay Male category for "The Jock and the Therapist." I've read all 3 stories in Bobby's world many, many times (just like your other stories) and glad I'm glad you won. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
follow up

please make a follow up story!!!!! i just love this one so much

TopBitchKTopBitchKalmost 13 years ago
ANOTHER GREAT STORY

I wasn't gonna read this story about BO because I was very upset with his character dumping Bobby from 'Bobby & the Jock', but when I read 'Bobby & the Cop' I just had to read this story. I just love the way you weave the characters from one story to another. I hope you write more about Bobby & Bo (Tony & Dom) because you make these stories so real. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Snake indeed!

You have captured Bo's voice so astutely and this story being told from his perspective is unlike any of your other work. It really shows your maturity and development as a writer moving away from characters who are very sympathetic to we readers like Bobby to a less sympathetic character like Bo and his multitude of coarse slang words for his 'snake' (LOL). To be able to give each of these characters such an authentic voice is quite an achievement and a hallmark of your remarkable talent.

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

I'm not going to claim to know what should come next in a series like this. And to be frank, maybe it is over. But I know that personally I want to see it continue. Each of the characters in it, from Bobby to Dom, Bo to Tony, has really grown on me. Even background characters like Maria or A.J. or Bobby's family feel like they have a place. And yes, most of the big characters have had their stories wrapped up, but life us one big series of stories, and I'd love to hear more about our main characters' backgrounds and futures, but I also love the minor characters enough to want them expanded upon. Hell, new characters are always fun!

What was Bo's life like befor Bobby? When did Tony or Dom begin their gay relationships? If Tony and Bobby look like a family, what might happen? Who knows! I don't pretend to tell you what to write next, because I know you'll exceed my expectations.

And that's not just it. I love your writing. Not just the porn in it (which is tastefully, if not entirely realistically portrayed), but the whole story. I look forward to the characters' development and growth. You know, you have a talent here, more than just stories on Literotica. I'm just saying you can do a lot with the writing skills you have. I'm not telling you to do something else with it, but, hell, I'd read it!

But most all, I'd like more stories in this series. The history, the characters, the stories, the sex; it's great and I'd love to see more.

Kazehana552Kazehana552almost 13 years ago

Yes! I love this story. I hated Bo for what the did to Bobby but this story made me realize he's a good guy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great Story!!!!

Love all your stories, especially the Bobby series. Would be wonderful if you did a follow-up with more interaction between the two gay brothers and their family. Even maybe either one or both of the couples adopting children or hiring a surrogate to have children of their own.

Thanks for the great stories. Hope you wiil publish more.

feelinromanticfeelinromanticabout 13 years ago
yay bo!

I know bo was the star, and quite rightly so, but it was nice to see some more of lil bobby's cheeky side too. Fingers crossed this wont be the last we hear of this series :) thanks for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Love It!

I absolutely love this series of stories, and know I will be re-reading them! I am so glad they all found their happiness, and that despite what happened with Bobby and Bo, they were able to remain friends, and will now basically be brothers. Will there be a sequel? Would love to read more about these characters!! Love everything of yours I have read so far, and planning on working my way through the ones I haven't. Please keep writing!

BraveBrashButterflyBraveBrashButterflyabout 13 years ago
:O

NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! ITS NOT OVER! >:O

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
WOW

I was rooting for Bo from the onset and this story just had such a happy ending, I had a stupid grin on my face as it was ending.

Lovely!

PepperPacePepperPaceabout 13 years ago
Nicely done!

I found myself wanting Bo and Bobby to get back together but he is happy with his man and Bo found what he needed in Dom. I do wish that he would have beat the crap out of the ex-boyfriend. But that's just me! Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
wow

you nailed it. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I really liked it. Bo was such a jerk to Darren though. Anyway, glad he also found someone.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
My Most Favorite robcub32 Story

I love this story. It has the best elements of all of your other stories but the bond between Dom and Bo seems deeper, more intense, and more ... fated. Like they're two halves that are finally made whole.

WittePietWittePietover 13 years ago
Superb as usual

One of your best! What I like about your characters is that the protagonists are such morally GOOD people who are thoughtful and considerate as well as loving. I wish I could write as well as you do.

CarelessLoveCarelessLoveover 13 years ago
Lovely.^_^

I'm so glad to see that Bo found his love to. I had been hoping since the first story that there would be a happy ending for Bo.

Wonderful job. Thank you for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great Story

I have to admit, when the first story ended I was a little disappointed because I wanted to see Bo and Bobby together. I am not sure if you planned it this way or if it were the comments that inspired you to write about Bo finding a true love but I am glad you continued the story line. I agree with others, I love your stories because they are stories, not just sex. I can actually picture everything has it unfolds in your work. I wish more writers wrote like you. You write true "Page Turners". I look forward to reading the rest of your work.

QhuayLoveQhuayLoveover 13 years ago
Finally...

...the story I've been waiting for. Thanks Rob! And I see you released "Guardian Angel" so it must be my lucky day. The universe must be smiling down at me for giving out such great candy out today ;]

I have to say that my favorite part of this story was when Dom was trying to hook Bo up with a new PT. It was LOL funny and made Bo all the more endearing to me.

I'm also very happy with the fact that Bo was included in the Paolucci family get together. It gave him a sense of belonging after his NFL family deserted him and it was so heartwarming for me as a reader. I'm glad that neither Bobby nor Dom were pushovers when it came to helping Bo get well. People often lash out when they fall because they don't want their loved ones to pity them and that's just what Bo did. In the end, Bo realized that he wasn't alone and he managed to get himself well enough to help Dom when Dom needed him as well.

I guess I just LOVED the interactions between Dom and Bo (both on and off the sheets). Thanks Rob, you touch me every time :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Just Great

Well you have done it again. What I love about your stories, is that you don't just write about sex, there is drama, humour, and of course love in all of your stories. please write some more excellent stories and share them because to me you are an excellent writer. Keep up with the stories.

no1manno1manover 13 years ago
Amazing

You done it again! Your writing just seems to get hotter and more action packed with every story you create. Only now I have to wait for more, but it's worth the wait ^_^

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
woah!!!!!

woah that story was sexy good....just good for no reason. can't wait till you write another on I read all your stories and i loved this one......keep writing

AzanianHeatAzanianHeatover 13 years ago
So happy

Your stories release my happy mojo every time. Really loved this one.

You write mushy romances the way I like 'em: with a sexy, realistic edge. Your characters face obstacles, grow and rise to claim the type of love we all dream of.

Awesome stuff!

AH

podgapodgaover 13 years ago
Really excellent

I like all your stories and I loved this one. Nice characterization, hot, tender, real AND romantic; what more can one ask for?

Looking forward to the next one!

dabe5090dabe5090over 13 years ago
Loved it

Once again another brilliant story. Loved that It further develops another character from you previous writings. The only bad thing about this is now I have to wait for the next master piece. Have you ever sold/published a story in this or another genre? If not you should seriously consider it as you are a very talented writer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I agree with all the other fans of your work, you're fabulous!

I was so excited to see that you posted up a story and even more so when it was Bo's story.

This was excellent as usual!

Cheers!

afrodita79afrodita79over 13 years ago
love it but....

love this story and I´m a big fun.... But i have to say, that there are some questions not answed, like how does but tell his family? whe do they tell Dom´s family? how does Bo come out to the public?.... this gives room to a secound part don´t you think....

Can´t wait four your next story

strmy1959strmy1959over 13 years ago
Great

As always another great story. Just love your writing. Have read all of them numerous times, including Tim and Hank. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I Love your stories!

I've read almost every single one and i have nothing to say but I love you and your stories.

Bill_MonosandBill_Monosandover 13 years ago
Mr Robcub32,

I always love your stories, and this one was no disappointment. Kudos on another outstanding read (even though you're keeping me from my uni assignments).

As long as you keep writing, I'll be here reading.

xx

Rockyroads50Rockyroads50over 13 years ago
Woohoo!!

After reading the Bobby series, yet again recently, I thought about how it would be nice to have a story about "The Jock" finding someone. Today, not only was I excited to see another of your wonderful stories but I got to read about Bo getting his happy ending. Thank you for this story and sharing all of you other ones with us. I still enjoy going back periodically to read them once again. I so look forward to your next one. Again, thank you!!

avidreader_01avidreader_01over 13 years ago
thank u

i've been waiting FOREVER for Bo's story and you did not disappoint...great job as always

sexylady6398sexylady6398over 13 years ago

Please don't STOP sharing..this was amazing from beginning to end

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

YES! everything you write is just AMAZING! Most of everything in the erotic world of writing is just sex, but you make an actual story with romance and sorrow and pain and...you're just an extremely talented writer. KEEP IT UP! You've got a really dedicated fan base.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Love it!

I absolutely adore all of your stories! I like that the "small" guy is not wimpy and always crying. Hmmm, that jerk deserved to have his face meet some of Dom's brothers fist.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Happy

I love all of your stories and I am so glad that Bo finally got himself a man! You are so incredibly talented, by far my favorite on Lit. Can't wait to read more from you! Thanks!

noni2674noni2674over 13 years ago
Awesome again

love your stories. you move me

zolia_lilyzolia_lilyover 13 years ago
loved it!

I've loved watching your writing evolve and get better- this one was amazing! I really empathised with both the characters and loved the reversal of your normal point of view! You really pulled it off!

Ps- I hope Darren gets a happy ending... I was so sure (for all of about 2 minutes) that he was going to be the love interest and somehow be in New York, too...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Yay!

I was really hoping to see Bo find some happiness. What a wonderful story! The connection and chemistry between Bo and Dom was beautiful. I love all your stories and get so happy when I see you've posted something new!

PheeGeePheeGeeover 13 years ago
Thanks!

I'm happy to see Bo get someone of his own. He struck me as someone who had a lot of love to give. Great story as always!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Always worth the wait!

Thank you for yet another beautiful story. I've read all of your work on Literotica, as well as Tim and Hank on Nifty. It's amazing to see how you're evolving as a writer. I'll be looking forward to your next story. Keep up the great work!

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