All Comments on 'The Joy of Joy Ch. 08'

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BfreetorunBfreetorunalmost 13 years ago
You need a proof-reader.

I noticed that Justin the bartender transformed to Josh the bartender in Chapter 4 or 5. I proof read for a small fee and if you can't afford it will do it for free. Bfreetorun@msn.com.

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