All Comments on 'The Jungle'

by conikeshet

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
More, more, more

I like your story. Chapter 2 please.

vargas111vargas111about 15 years ago
Yes, continue

But switch to first person, the woman's POV.

I suspect they will be released only when the men are sure they are pregnant.

ladydaleyladydaleyabout 15 years ago
Turn the tables!

It would be good to see Manon trussed up and the girls enjoying his 'discomfort' before this story is out! But I did enjoy it. Well done.

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