All Comments on 'The Katariah Ch. 01'

good start to a good story

So, to everyone, I have lots of crap i have been going through and will go through. So, I'm sorry for long lengths between chapters. But if you really want there to be more chapters, let me know. I want to know if my series is actually good.

Its a good start, would like to see you continue this.

I like the idea, and the writing was decent, but could use some work. Some more description, for instance, and the dialogue has to sound more natural. Hen again, this is set in the future, so the way people speak could be different. Overall, it was pretty good. Can't wait for the next one.