All Comments on 'The Katie Chronicles Ch. 01'

If this really is a true story, you sound incredibly sexy... in a devious sorta way ;). I enjoyed your style of storytelling. It was descriptive, but interesting and added to the story. Many writers just clutter up their stories with useless info. Everything you wrote enhanced the story and made it play out almost like a movie.

You have a talent... Keep writing, and please continue this story...because it's great. :)

I wish I had a girl like you.

cant wait for the next part.. what will the daughter see next xxx

Very hot! Well set up. Can't wait for more!

Bravo for Kyle. Her republican father deserved to be cheated on. In the course of making his money, he probably fucked a lot of people too. lol

Just absolutely great, you must continue, lot of possibilites.

A very fun read. Definitely has possibilities for sequels. Thanks!

The title of my comment says it all.

I like the way you weave in the narrator's (your?) voyeurism and autoeroticism with the main sexual action. This could become a novel!

You are a very good story teller. I would have loved to be there to witness this.

and love the fact that for a change it is the daughter watching her mom being fucked - so very erotic.

Wish that was my wife with Kyle.

This was fantastically hot. Wish you would write more, Miss SallyG!

Fantastic story

I was thinking chap 2 was more about mom and Kyle. want to know if they keep seeing each other? Or if dad found out, and is dad also fucking someone also.

It’s fun and it’s hot. 5 stars.

LOVE IT