All Comments on 'The Lady and the Cowboy Ch. 08'

I've read this so many times and I love it more each time! It's wonderful. I hope you write some more stories someday.

I am so incredibly glad that I found this story! I read all but the last chapter in the course of one day, and finished the story the next morning. What a sweet way to begin my day! This story drew me in, engrossed me, and I found it so hard to stop! Wonderful wonderful writing!

I typically never comment on any story, but yours was absolutely wonderful. Thank you very much!!

Read every chapter in one day, it was that good. I loved the humor, the setting, the characters, and the romance. I had a feeling this was gonna be amazing but once I read that last line I cried like a baby. Absolutely loved how you ended it with the filly. A stroke of genius. I still go back and read that line and I still end up crying. PLEASE PLEASE make another story!!!! You're amazing!!!!

it was so heartfelt and beautiful! great work!

and marveled anew. Thank you. The last sentence particularly was wonderful.

So so so wonderful :) :) made my heart fly

So very HOT! It was amazing and I think you should add another chapter of happily ever after! Thanks

Such a wonderful romantic story. I'm sad that this story is over and really depressed that you haven't written new stories. I know tonight my hubby is going to give a heavy sigh, roll his eyes and hug me close while I start blathering about Tripp and Kira.

You write as one who has experienced being swept away by a loving mate. Thanks for sharing!

I loved the whole story and especially finding out at the end that the foal had survived.

Thanks again for a wonderful story.

I enjoyed your story, especially the begining. It had a certain "Dirty Dancing" feel to it with the Summer vacation and forbidden love with the "help". I found the ending a little too soppy with love for my taste, but I suppose you were trying for that. Kira seemed a bit less mature than a regular 19 year old and frankly showed very little respect for her parents or the Watermans. When she said "I'm staying with Tripp and you can't stop me" she seemed quite impetuous and though I know love makes the best of us irrational, I found her attitude and disregard for her parents' concerns to be childish and disrespectful. In addition, the 27 year old Tripp should have known better to ignore the whole situation and dissapear to the coral. He should have been there to talk to her parents and alieviate some of their concerns,To be the mature, caring, loving manyou want him to be, he should have talked to her parents. Plus, it would show that he gave a damn about whether she was allowed stay. His absence seems out of character to me.

I'm saying all this, not to discourage you, but to help you to write better in the future. You have skill with words that many people wish for. Work on it and get even better.

I did enjoy the series immensly. However, like the previous commentator, the level of maturity of all the players were slightly off kilter. There was also ample opportunity for her to develope a better relationship to the Watermans as well but that was glossed over.

Even with the slight problem above, I still rated the series as a 5 and have favorited it as I do love a good story.

Thank you for this story, it brought back many good memories of my cowboy!

You could leave out cock, cunt (which many abhor), pussy and you would have the most arousing of stories still. Leaving a little to the imagination is good. I loved it!

Was very erotic loved it,the 4 th chapter was amazingly sexy and romantic love it

Hard to believe this is your first story... you certainly have a flair for writing a wonderful erotic romance... Keep up the great work, I'll be looking forward to reading your future endeavors!!!

Have you submitted anything to Harlequin Romance? If not, you definitely should! You will be rich and very well known! Have a wonderful future!

I loved, loved, loved your story! you should publish a book! please write more stories very soon! Cant wait!

first work you have here. I read it straight thru the night. will look for more from you.

This story was truly amazing! I think this is the fourth time I've read it and even though i know what's going to happen im still swept away. Well done.

A well constructed and thoughtful story

Your story is sweet and romantic, and obviously written from the point of view of a lady - a girl. So many of the stories written are not that way. You express emotion seldom seen anymore because love seems to have become a business - not a relationship. I liked the character development and the raw emotion that you expressed. You did it well.

My only question is 'why haven't you written more?' You're a good writer. There is more you can do, and if you have gone commercial, please let us know where to buy your work.

I'm waiting for this series to come out as a movie on Hallmark; it's been added to my All-Time Favorite bookmarks.

As others have said; the characters, emotions and story seem real

Thank you;

DKP

BTW; love "wettest wet" 8~)

I was caught by the first story and had to keep reading! It is refreshing to read a story that is so romantic and well written. Thank you for your wonderful story and the time you took to share it with the world.

I really enjoyed the story. Thank you. Hope you can write more :)

aw, I loved this series. Beautiful story. I'm so glad they found a way to work it out. I would have loved to have a brother like Luke. Actually have a guy like Tripp.

Please write some more

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Loved it!

Kris, this is far and away the best series I've ever read! That your scoring average is less than 5.0 on every chapter is simply unbelievable. Thank you for writing it!

I LOVE your series, I can read them over and over again.

I loved your series.great work.thank you

i love this series, read it so manytimes.

Loved it and have read it many times but it's agitating with how often the days are mixed up. I.e. Something that happened yesterday is referred to as a couple days ago etc I think you should do a second part of this series in tripp's point of view :)

I truly enjoyed your story and the characters in it. Can't wait to read more of your work.

great series, please write more! I loved the characters and the setting. You built a great story and it was fun to read

PLEASE WRITE MORE

I have until now never commented on any stories but you HAVE to write a lot more and soon. This was a really magnificent story, I enjoyed it from beginning to end.

VERY WELL DONE. Other writers please take note of this story

This was by far the best erotic story I have ever read! I personally have a thing for country boys, so this really hit the spot for me. And the horse, California, was a great addition to the story, I would never be able to think of putting things like that in one. 10/10! Stay inspired!

I love this story. Can't wait to read more of your work. Could you please write this story from Tripp's point of view or do a continuation of it with Kira and Tripp having kids please?😊

An amazing and beautiful story. So wonderfully written.

You cared about the characters. I actually wanted Tripp to beat the scumbag willy to pulp!

Thank you so much.

U seemed very intune with the characters. From a country boy stand point I feel Tripp's pain & guilt. Please continue this series

Thank you for this diverting story!

I really enjoyed the ride.

A great story. I could visualize the rails and stamped packed dirt of the corral, the smell of the straw in the stable and the roller coaster of emotions that ran riot throughout the story, including the ending with a horse that should have been put down but had enough fight to survive and run.

If this is your first western themed story I hope it is not the last.

I agree with Talonsreach, but since I live on a horse ranch I don't have to visualize the sight and smells. I was captured by the foal with the broken leg; anyone who has had to put a horse down knows how painful that is. I was glad that part turned out well. Thanks for a great read.

Thank you I love your story very much and I hope to read some more of your writing soon and thank you for the stories

Magical love story! It's as if we are actually inside the story witnessing everything through our eyes. Fell in love with the characters and especially loved the ending when she decides to stay not snapping at her parents when they try to change her mind but instead smiling and bouncing happily through it all. And the epilogue is just fine as it explains how they maintained their relationship. Nothing more was expected of it. We got a good tale and a closure. Thank you for writing it!

You brought me to tears many times, but especially in chapters 7 and 8. I admire how Tripp and Kira work through their fight and their struggle to love each other. It wasn't easy, and many odds were against them. But they did have a real love for each other from the heart. I loved their nakedness, and seeing them get naked. He took a real pleasure in her nakedness, her breasts, her shaven pussy, and making real love to her. She took a real pleasure in the sexy dark hair that graced his muscular chest and abs, his large cock that gave her multiple pleasures, his tender kisses. Even when they lay together after sex to cuddle, they are caressing and touching and tasting each other's charms.Thank you for keeping them together and seeing their romance through. I love their endurance, and wish them well. What a beautiful story of love!

I loved reading this. Thank you so much for writing it.

Please don't quit. you're too good for this to be it.NP63qd

I am an old 80 year man and have read a lot of stories but this one moved me more than any that I recall. GREAT JOB

I love how you were able to balance the amount of erotic and romantic scenes in this story. Great job!

Totally beautiful! I'm glad they ended up together ❤!

Please make this into a real book and get it published. It's amazing and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

From beginning to end... Outstanding.

Interesting, held my attention beginning to end. Easy to submerge myself into and feel the story happening. I hope to see more.

I absolutely LOVED this story!!!!!! Perfect combination of love, list, and a bit of drama. Thank you for ending it with a happily ever after.

An excellent story and a perfect opportunity to continue this story with these characters in many more adventures. Expand on the marriage, kids, expansion of the ranch, Kira's family coming back? I really like your writing style and the setting of your story. The quality of your editing was way above par compared to most of the really good stories published here. Please keep up the writing. I am looking forward to more of your stories.

Wow. This was a sweet cowboy romance I didn’t know I needed. Your writing only got better and better with every chapter. Eventually I felt like I was in the middle of a movie! I laughed, I cried, I felt their passion. A moment brought a genuine smile to my face. I must say I didn’t know what to expect, it seemed a little young and vague in the beginning but we really saw Kira blossom, along with your writing. Bravo. Like others, of course I’d like to see more of these 2. But this was a great, wholesome complete story as it is. I look forward to your future creations. Love!!!

Everything was just magical!! You really could feel the emotions of every. single. character. Thank you for completing this story

A truly wonderful story. You really brought the characters to life. A thoroughly enjoyable read Many thanks to you.

Wonderfully done. A great story. Please continue to write you have a true gift for it.

First of all I'm a middle aged guy and your story reminded me of what real love feels like. It took me back to the all consuming intensities of my great loves. It made me realize that my heart has become comfortably numb and made me hope that maybe I can learn to feel even some of the intensity of love again. Thank you. Oh and write on, you are truly gifted in bringing out the emotions in your characters and, in my case, your readers as well.

still think that Mrs. Waterman should have offered her a "job" for the rest of the summer in front of her parents.

8 chapters and i thought this story was going to end without a marriage...but no....though a very rushed end!!

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Damnit! Start writing your 2nd story PLEASE! This should be made into a movie! 10stars! (Yes, i pressed the 5stars 2 times...😏)