All Comments on 'The Lady Wore Red Ch. 04'

Sick,horrible,disgusting story! The author of this foul rancid crapula should be castrated!

That's a bit much, isn't it?

on the standard succubus tale. I'm not normally a reader of the erotic horror category, but I'm enjoying your story quite a bit. I was at first confused by the Michael/Lily shift, and I still feel it could be improved, but I will say that as Lily's confusion has fled, so has mine; so perhaps it was somewhat intentional.

Evidently the other commenter either missed the category or doesn't understand the concept (or at least the possibilities) of Erotic Horror. I hope his ignorant insult doesn't dissuade you from continuing this story. Thanks for writing!

An excellent break from the usual succubus stories that read like teenage wet dreams. Keep it up.

Well, thank god. I was starting to worry that I'd done something really, really wrong. And, thank you for the compliments. Apologies for the length of time between chapters.

More please :)

It's good to have you back, Lycandope; not quite where I was expecting the story to go, but still very good. I can't wait to see where it goes next time. Ignore the first comment, someone is being an idiot whilst abusing their anonymity or not understanding the implications of 'erotic horror.' Good work. Keep it up.

I am a bit nervous about this one. After I published it I totally wanted to add more to it. I feel like I didn't do a smooth job with the transition of her mentality. Blah. But, it's okay? I haven't read any succubus stories before so I don't know what's "normal"

Hope you try Winter Coat and like it! I also have a sci-fi piece waiting on approval and I think it turned out really well :)

like, seriously, im more feeling the horror than eroticism but not in bad way just very different to wat im used to. Lilys transformation full on

Please keep writing this story, it's been a while since I've read something as original as this!