All Comments on 'The Lake House Lessons 06'

by JayDavid

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NeptoonNeptoonalmost 12 years ago
another good one

very well rounded with some new interesting turns can't wait to see where it all goes

andyMassageandyMassagealmost 12 years ago
more, more

Please continue same pace. Look forward to hearing about Fred/Emily - Gina/Hank

maybe get the sisters in a 3some with Jack. Also great twist with Jack's dad and Mrs. Angelo. We have to learn more details and have them hooked up going out together maybe married :) Thanks for the story posts.

JayDavidJayDavidalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks for the feedback. 6 more chapters to go. The focus stays on Jack, but not exclusively.

eaglemonkeaglemonkalmost 12 years ago
super story

Hi love your story. Maybe Gina und Jack come together. I think Jacks like her more than as an friend. Keep going

SamoaJohnSamoaJohnalmost 12 years ago
Great story.

This has been a great story so far and it's moved along very well. Of all the girls I think Ariel is my favorite. Though it looks like there is something going on with Gina and she likes Jack but is too afraid to admit it. Can't wait for more. This is a great story and it's a lot of fun and well written. The love scenes are fantastic too.

General_OGeneral_Oalmost 12 years ago
great read

love the story and the pace looking forward to next chapter

photosaurusphotosaurusalmost 12 years ago
Great series!

I'm loving this series. My favorite girl is, of course, Dana.

JayDavidJayDavidalmost 12 years agoAuthor
More thanks

Thanks for the positive feedback. Lots more to come, and for those fans of Dana, my next series will be a version of this series, but told from Dana's perspective.

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
Thanks

The social nature of the core group is getting muddled.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
ANOTHER 5 STARS

One of the most awesome series on Literotica.

So much in the works:

Jack's dad and Dana's mom

Fred and Emily

Gina and Hank

And, of course, Jack and Dana

Plus Jack and ?

Paul in Oklahoma

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