by JayDavid
very well rounded with some new interesting turns can't wait to see where it all goes
Please continue same pace. Look forward to hearing about Fred/Emily - Gina/Hank
maybe get the sisters in a 3some with Jack. Also great twist with Jack's dad and Mrs. Angelo. We have to learn more details and have them hooked up going out together maybe married :) Thanks for the story posts.
Thanks for the feedback. 6 more chapters to go. The focus stays on Jack, but not exclusively.
Hi love your story. Maybe Gina und Jack come together. I think Jacks like her more than as an friend. Keep going
This has been a great story so far and it's moved along very well. Of all the girls I think Ariel is my favorite. Though it looks like there is something going on with Gina and she likes Jack but is too afraid to admit it. Can't wait for more. This is a great story and it's a lot of fun and well written. The love scenes are fantastic too.
I'm loving this series. My favorite girl is, of course, Dana.
Thanks for the positive feedback. Lots more to come, and for those fans of Dana, my next series will be a version of this series, but told from Dana's perspective.
One of the most awesome series on Literotica.
So much in the works:
Jack's dad and Dana's mom
Fred and Emily
Gina and Hank
And, of course, Jack and Dana
Plus Jack and ?
Paul in Oklahoma