by JayDavid
I'm really enjoying this series. It would be nice if you could leave us with the Gina pairing as the only at the end though.
Amazing story. I don't know about anyone else but I think Dana has more fillings than she is letting on. It seems it's leading for him to get together with Gina but I hope he ends up with Dana. That is, in my opinion, the best possible outcome and what I hope happens
for such a genius he sure is an idiot. gina is all pissy all of a sudden because he is not with her. she is plan and simply jealous, and hurting.
Jack is an idiot. He is book smart, but not smart about women. Although he is learning, he is far from perfect.
Good chapter. I'm looking forward to see what Dana's plans are. I don't know what it is but I just don't seem to like Gina as much though the story seems to be leading in that direction. I think deep down Dana really does like Jack though.
i'm gonna actually hold my comment on the jack/gina thing till it actually happens. but as of yet i haven't actually seen a woman in this series that i think jack would actually settle down with considering all the fun he is having atm
I just finished reading the series of seven. Great stories thus far and I don't think that you will disappoint me regardless of what direction this series takes toward it's ending. Just keep writing, and I will certainly keep writing.
Your story is really tightly written and the scenes are extremely well executed.
How did Jack get home if Fred drove him to the party? Wouldn't Dana have to drive him home?