All Comments on 'The Lake House Pt. 02'

Who is Luke, and what he he do with Jack?

and in the first chapter Jack called Peyton 'Brooke'.....possibly mixing up the characters of another story you might be writing? :)

Luke...no maybe I'll call him...Jack...Brooke...nah, maybe I prefer...Payton, DECIDE what your characters names are and stick with them! 2*

So clearly after a few years you forgot your own characters names, did you not re-read chapter one? You went from Jack and Brooke to Luke and Payton. Why? If you're going to be writing more at least be consistent with your characters names. 3* and hoping you at least now stick with the names you used in this chapter.

ok, I know a few have mentioned it, but why did you change their names?

Sure fire way to lose readers is to IGNORE them when they ask you a question!