All Comments on 'The Lakeland Family'

I don't usually read stories that are this long, but I didn't even notice in this case because it pulled me in and held my interest.

I hope there's more to this story. I like you're writing style, and will look for more stories by you.

1-The dialogue during the sex scenes was horrifically hokey. "Give me your son-cum!" Christ, some of the lines were really bad. The female dialogue was too obviously written by a very young, cum-drunk male. 2-As with most Incest stories on Lit, the characters went from never having any incestuous history or even any incestuous thoughts about each other to instantly having no-holds-barred monkey sex, in the blink of an eye. Sorry, but mothers don't just suddenly decide to get naked for and tease the shit out of their young sons, completely out of the blue. Sisters don't suck their brothers' cocks, on a sudden whim. Mothers certainly don't just suddenly suck and fuck their sons, not when there was no previous sexual history there. There would be some serious discussions, first. Bare minimum, the parties involved would need to work their way up to it; slowly, bit by bit, act by act.<p>

Writers of Incest stories need to slow the fuck down. There are way too many examples of this, where writers treat first-time incest like it's just another frat party hook-up. These are life changing acts they're committing. These things don't just happen on an impulse. Deciding to fuck your son for the first time isn't like picking up a pack of Altoids while you're waiting in the check out line at the supermarket.

I thought it was an outstanding tale! It certainly held my attention from beginning to end. I think you need to give us many more of this quality. And I don't think you need to pay a lot of attention to anonymous comments. If a critic needs to hide behind his anonymity, his criticism isn't worth a good "shit"! Thanks for your story.

Loved the pace, the dialogue, the descriptive sex.

If Dad & Mom have been married over 20 years, haven't they had sex over 1000 times, not "hundreds"? (once per week for 20 years = 1000)

So is Julia preggers?

It's been a long time since a good story has been posted, but you've restored hope in me that there are still some out there. That was very, VERY good. Also longer than I usually read, but well written enough to hold my attention. Well done penTtup

When will there be more, please?

this story's atmosphere is irresistable. it catches you in a sudden thick arouse. Hot!

My three favorite types of incest in one story.

It would be nice to have a part 2. They casually stay naked all the time and from time to time tease one another by casually sniffing the mom or sister's pussies and laugh about the musky but erotic scent. Or accidentally impaled to one of the cock while bending down or cleaning something. etc.

Very hot story. I find stories that have that have the father, mother, son and daughter all fucking in the same room (like "A Family Adventure") very sexy. Glad the son and father didn't do anything with each other too. That doesn't do anything for me (Sue me. I'm a homophobe).

loved this story!!

Just finished this and wish I had seen it sooner. The whole family having sex together is very hot to me.

The rich and lusty development of the story was great. The gleeful appreciation of the sex and the individuals was delightful. Even better if the family blending can begin without an initial "cheating" element, but this worked out fine.

Thanks.

The story developes well. The sexual attractions among the family members raises the body temperature. The eagerness of the children turns up the heat and makes the situation more appealing.

Well written. Well presented. Well imagined.

family love on boat vacation incest as usual

Hot!! The illustrated version would be great. Perhaps these folks could get some neighbors involved when they return home.