by ChristopherMaxwell
Way too much exposition and not nearly enough sex. The characters seem more interested in fucking each other up than in fucking. Whats the point?
its principal strength satisfaction of our communal 'largest' sex organ--the brain. This story satisfies that requirement in a well written piece and at the same time presents another, entirely new, facet of human sexuality--the most divine and sublime thing we do and are. Personally I look forward to anything this author has to say in the future.